Reviews for The Outlandish Courtship of Isabella Swan |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this little story. Thanks for writing and sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely cute and hilarious! In the beginning (or in the end of their story, I guess) their relationship seemed so predetermined, but that it all started with an unwanted fruit... Thanks for the story! |
![]() ![]() I tried singing 'The Elements' a few days ago. . . I'm so glad I was home alone, because I ended up crying in frustration. Goddamn song. Any who, loved it! I appreciate how difficult it is to come up with all of these intersecting plot lines that all meet up in the end and create a cohesive picture, so fabulously done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well that was certainly "Outlandish, Imponderable, and Altogether Unorthodox"...but it was very VERY good D I loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() One word to sum this baby up. Sublime. |
![]() ![]() ![]() really enjoyed this story- so well told! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was such a fun story. Hearing the story unfold from various points of view was great! This was very well written and edited. I smiled through the whole thing. My only negative comment would be about the language. Certain words distract from the story, even if its supposed to be realistic. But overall, the story was quirky and wonderful. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely adore this story. I know you commented on how you don't really like the Edward and Bella pairing, but this was just so interesting and endearing. I really liked it. LoL...I read it right before I left work and I thought about it the whole ride home. I can see this kind of plot fleshed out and turned into one of those fun, snarky indie movies. Very nice. I really enjoyed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fun and random. Thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this... Absolutely love this... it makes no sense... but it's awesomeness in its purest chaotic form :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is simply one of the most adorable things. Ever. Charming and witty and completely lovely. Thank you for sharing! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() And it all started with a pine apple! This is funny! I enjoyed both of their queerness |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved that, never laughed so hard in my life, the part about the pineapple upside down cake was fracking hilarious |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! Absolutely love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is so wonderful. the composition, the authentic voices, the atmosphere. the atmosphere alone made me all bright eyed and feeling good; you'd have to read one of every five words not to feel it, catch it. usually, i find it most difficult to find a young and hopeful kind of atmosphere convincing, but this. this has won me over 4/5 into the story. it's a very very well written short. i've returned to it three times already since i've read it first, and i'm going to return to it more times to come. thank you. |