Reviews for The Outlandish Courtship of Isabella Swan |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Well done story! You did a good job at making the voices of each character distinct. I think Lauren was my favorite point of view. Also, Jessica's point of view reminded me of the girl in Ferris Beuller's Day Off who rambled to the teacher why Ferris was sick. Oh, and the last line made me burst with laughter. Again, great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() absolutely adorable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like your story, it's very original and funny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so sweet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, this must be one of the most original one-shots ive read in the fandon. Honestly, i loved all the diffent point o views, with each persons persepective of those two. And the twist in the main characters its also very refrashing. The last POV, with the coach, was really funny, and a great way to end the story. The whole one-shot was really awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was so bizarre & SO much fun to read - the title (especially the full title) is truly perfect. There was a grocery store commercial just on that showed a pineapple and grapes side by side on the conveyor belt and I laughed like crazy thinking "it's like they're meant to be together!" I have a feeling I'll be giggling about those fruits for quite a while. I really enjoyed the addition of your own characters as bystanders, too. Loved that Rich couldn't pinpoint his great aunt and that Gertz has both the most and the least information on their courtship. Fantastic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh this was completely crazy, I love it thanks for this one-shot, it cracked me up anna |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! The premise is so in tune with all the characters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very quirky/cute! Nicely done! -ICMezzo |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahah I liked this a lot it was a fresh take on the whole edward/bella relationship- very fun to read :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to honestly say, I'm in love with this one-shot...as twisted as it is. Thanks for writing. I'm still smiling.:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG please tell me you're expanding on this story in either EPOV or BPOV...this story is just brilliant and i laughed my ass off! I also really think this would be a really fun story to read! :) I hope you think about it and decide to expand because I sure as hell would read it! Great job bb! |
![]() ![]() ![]() gah this was so cute and weird. i absolutely loved it. |