|Reviews for Athletics Day|
| pippapear chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
I LOVE THIS!
I don't know what I love best?
Use of the term pokey?
He had a pokey for Bella!(btw - there is a product in blighty called hokey pokey.. & Ice cream sellers in Glasgow used to be called Hokey Pokey men.. BWAHhahah! (random fact for you my dear) ).
Or the insults at Lauren/Jess..
Or the alice squeezing Jasper's balls... LOL
Or her inner narrative full of smutty thoughts & lusty gazes..
OH & I love when she doesn't twig - even when he palms her tits - inc when they harden AND caresses her arse..
Naughty valedictorian ... ;)
Randy Geeky Yummer that he is.. :)
Yeah I loved this. I would happily read more and more of these 2.
| lulabelljane chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
This was so adorably cute! Loved it!
| Mariana75 chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
Why would my IQ be at risk?
This was really cute and fluffy and sweet... and very very funny! Especially the queezing balls part! It just never fails! :P
I thought for sure they were going to win at least 1 event! LOL But this was much better! And it was great to see they conceded they weren't perfect, and yet still be very much in love!
Thanx for this long and fantastic o/s!
| rosygloss chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
Ah, Dolle. Loved this. You write funny like no one else in ff.
| Tiggrmommi chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
Hilariously funny! Loved it!
| KimberlyAnnT chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
I loved this...