|Reviews for Red Cloud's|
| HakuDei chapter 6 . 8/11/2010
| Chipmunk24797 chapter 6 . 6/19/2010
Kool! I luv da whole drama drama drama thing goin on in chapters 5 and 6!
Plus the drunk bit in da casino was class!
I am so gonna read your other books XP
| Imag1nat1on chapter 6 . 5/1/2010
It kinda leaves me wanting more. Even though I dont really think that the story should've gone on any longer because the story also got closure in this chapter as they were re-united. Maybe I just feel like I wanted more of this story because I think these characters are great. And I would love to see more of them.
I guess what I am trying to say is:
1. that I really think you make the characters come alive (if you know what i mean with that?)
2. and that I really enjoyed this story.
And as a conclusion: I Hope you keep writing fanfics (especially kakuzuxhidan ones :D), cause I will definetely be reading them :D
| Imag1nat1on chapter 5 . 5/1/2010
This chapter made me tear-up! I think that means that you're a good writer. That you have succeeded to make the characters and story come alive kind of, and that you have succeeded to engage the reader in the story!
Just wanted to tell you that :)
| YaoiPhox chapter 6 . 2/20/2010
xD Nice~ I love it. Funny, angsty, romantic, etc, etc. xD
| Suger Cane Panda chapter 6 . 1/16/2010
I just read all six chapters in one sitting, horay for literature adictions! XD Anyways this was a realy good story. The plot was kick ass and I loved the fack that it wasn't just mindless smut. So keep writing awsome stories this one whent out of the park with me! -
| Emerald Gaze chapter 6 . 12/22/2009
yes the proper term is "lemon"
and u were right the story was better than the summary
at first i almost went past it anyway but i instead descided to take ur word for it and read it anyway
good thing i did
it also worked out very well considering the fact that u didnt have a clue what the conflict was even gonna be about
by the way i wouldnt mind reading more if u feel like writing it!_!
| Sweetdums chapter 6 . 11/6/2009
I would've never thought of Hidan as the writer type, but I think it's such a great idea and concept. :D This story is great, and I throughly enjoyed it! 3
| Bravenico chapter 6 . 10/4/2009
Hey,I read this after reading the last chap of TNM, meaning... a while ago, jeje, sorry for not reviewing sooner, I just felt sleepy that day, and then I forgot U. But anyways, I liked this, and it is kinda sad that you didn't continued it, but like it is now is really kool. Keep f&%$ing that chicken )
| Zombie-optimist93 chapter 6 . 9/21/2009
HIHIHIHIHI! OMG! me luw oUO oh, I love the personality you've given them and I adore the ending XD
| Spirits.Dawn chapter 6 . 9/3/2009
haha, i love hidan's ending reaction. I already favorited this story...but I never reviewed...hm...well, here goes...**shouts out loud** OMG THAT WAS ON OF THE EFFIN STORIES IN THE ENTIRE FANFICTION HISTORY! I LOVE IT! ...i love KuzuxHii-chan;-)
| shikamaru's fangirlxxx chapter 6 . 8/28/2009
that was realy good!
But i think more should have hapened after they got back together, it was a bit short. still that just proves i liked it much D
| Rakuen Tachibana chapter 6 . 8/20/2009
OMG! I loved it...*Clapping*
| Nini-sama chapter 6 . 8/20/2009
OH MY FUCKING JASHIN SAMA *.* !
It's just... Just... WAOW OO! I LOVE this story *.*!
I'm french, but I understand ALL of it *.*! It's a miracle! \o/
Hum, in a serious way, you write very very very good, and the story is original, amazing, and and and and... Kyah I LOVE *.*!
Thanks a lot for this moment *.*!
| iamthelorax chapter 6 . 8/19/2009
Hmm, well where to start. I really liked the story. I really did, the premise was great and it was written well. Both of them seemed pretty IC to me, their exchange during the lemon was particualy hilarious/awesome. However I strongly suggest you use proper punctuation. As well written as the story is the lack of capitol letters at the begining of each sentance made it dificult to take seriously. I personally have great trouble with both spelling and commas, so I always, (ok not always, but mostly) have a beta read through my fic before hand, I think you would also benifit from that. You have great potential as a writer and I hope to see more of you, (specially on this pairing, you really have their dynamic well down). Just work on your capitolization.
Also, I know your pain about reviews. I have this one story that has two reviews. Both of them are from people I know in real life, (my sister and my friend) and I asked them to go read and review my story. T_T
Sorry for con/crit if you don't like it, and happy to help if you do.