|Reviews for Something To Hold Onto|
| Tsu'tey chapter 13 . 4/8
OMG i love it. that ending was beautiful, the whole story was... :) me love u :D
| jennykrulez chapter 13 . 3/7
Read this for the first time and LOVED IT
| fanatla chapter 13 . 1/8
I started reading this wonderful story 24 hours ago and now that I get to the last chapter I just want to thank you for sharing it with us the readers.
Again thank you.
| Anonymous chapter 13 . 12/27/2014
Oh gosh. I read this fantastic fic at least five times now- on AO3 and here- and it's still one of my Top 5 favorites. The way you described everything is just- wow. And the way you wrote the plot- and the ending is just beautiful! Keep writing! You have such great talent! :)
| jj chapter 13 . 12/1/2014
wow that was great
| machi-pan chapter 13 . 11/19/2014
Four years too late to say this but this is the best fanfic in the whole Avatar the Last Airbender community. Thanks so much for writing this!
| pinkypiejr12 chapter 13 . 8/23/2014
Aww! Adorable! Magnificent! Hilarious! Heartwarming! Awesome! Badass! This story was all of the above. Not joking, I loved it with all of my soul. You are an amazing amazing author and should continue writing, cuz thou can do it exceptionally well.
| Niori chapter 13 . 8/2/2014
So, I didn't even ship this until I stumbled onto this story, and now it's one of my favourites.
This was just so amazing, on so many levels. The plot, the characterizations, the feels...all of it. It was just so spectacular. I don't even know how else to describe it without gushing for paragraphs and paragraphs!
| fingers-falling-upwards chapter 13 . 7/31/2014
Oh my God. Such an epic fic. Seriously. I had never read JetxZuko before. Generally I ship Zutara, but damn, you converted me. I really want to go check other Jetko fics, but I just know none of them will stack up. Such a beautiful fic in its originality. Well executed in technicalities and storytelling. Not to mention the absolutely stellar characterization. I wanted it to be longer, and longer, and more in depth, and just MORE. This is one of my favorite Avatar fics now. Thank you so much for writing this, it was an utter delight to read!
| the hotpocket hunter chapter 13 . 7/4/2014
Spectacular. Frikkin' spectacular. I tried to find some good slash a while back, nothing doing. I read about ten fanfictions at a time- switch around if I get bored or my mood chanes. I read this straight through.
| BrownBunny1976 chapter 13 . 6/23/2014
Hey :) So last week I read this whole story and I just had to leave a comment for you :) I LOVE it! 3 3 3 I've been trying to find any decent Zuko-centered fanfics and this is the only one I loved and the only one I went back to reread my favorite scenes and will do so again :) Thank you for this amazing story and for the happy ending :)))
I also checked out the pictures on the other website - it's always amazing when stories have pictures with them :) Makes it all so much more pleasurable to imagine the scenes :)
One of the main things why I think this story is very good is that it's realistic. Jet's reaction to the truth and the process of how he gradually with time started to let Zuko back in step by step - this is what I loved the most. Usually fanfics deal with serious issues stupidly and resolve them in an annoying manner. But your story really took time and effort to fix the situation and to fix their behavior and that's why them getting back together was so much more pleasurable to read!
My favorite scenes are the one where Zuko gives himself out by saving Jet and the following Jet's reaction, and how he threw Zuko out in the street like a dog. And I love the talk they had when Jet came to see Zuko and how Jet was sitting outside Zuko's room, the following morning and how finally they kissed again and made it all better. These parts I can read a million times - they're so good! :)
Oh, and the ending was so great! I can see Jet wanting to leave and Zuko be terrified of what was to come.
Maybe I ramble too much, but I really fell in love with this story and just wanted to tell you how much I loved those moments in the story! And the whole story, of course ;) 3
| SookiYakima chapter 6 . 6/19/2014
Wow. You are a great writer, but the first few chapters are really my favorite!
The part when Jet found out Zuko was fire nation is a little hazy, but the fact that this fic is wonderful is undeniable.
Keep up ur good work.
And also, whoever reviewed below me, post your song fics somewhere else, please. The reviews and comments is to assure the author.
| darth fluffy chapter 5 . 3/29/2014
Song time again!
Zuko: And now I'm all alone again, nowhere to turn, no one to go to
Without a home, without a friend, without a face to say hello to
But now the night is near
And I can make believe... he's here
Sometimes I walk alone at night when everybody else is sleeping
I think of him and then I'm happy with the company I'm keeping
The city goes to bed
And I can live inside... my head
On my own, pretending he's beside me
All alone, I walk with him 'til morning
Without him, I feel his arms around me
And when I lose my way I close my eyes and he has found me
In the rain, the pavement shines like silver
All the lights are misty in the river
In the darkness, the trees are full of starlight
And all I see is him and me forever and forever
And I know it's only in my mind
That I'm talking to myself and not to him
And although I know that he is blind
Still I say, there's a way for us
I love him, but when the night is over
He is gone; the river's just a river
Without him, the world around me changes
The trees are bare and everywhere the streets are full of strangers
I love him, but every day I'm learning
All my life, I've only been pretending
Without me, his world will go on turning
A world that's full of happiness that I have never known!
I love him
I love him
I love him
But only on my own
I think that's the best one yet. Also, another Les Mis song. I have a feeling this'll be a trend. :)
| darth fluffy chapter 12 . 3/28/2014
And now for a completely different musical!
Jet: I'm limited
Just look at me
And just look at you
You can do all I couldn't do, Zuko
So now it's up to you
For both of us
Now it's up to you
Zuko: I've heard it said
That people come into our lives
For a reason
Bringing something we must learn
And we are led
To those who help us most to grow
If we let them
And we help them in return
Well, I don't know if I believe that's true
But I know I'm who I am today
Because I knew you...
Like a comet pulled from orbit
As it passes a sun
Like a stream that meets a boulder
Halfway through the wood-
Who can say if I've been changed for the better, but
Because I knew you,
I have been changed... for good
Jet: It well may be
That we will never meet again
In this lifetime
So let me say before we part
So much of me
Is made of what I learned from you
You'll be with me
Like a handprint on my heart
And now whatever way our stories end
I know you have rewritten mine
By being my friend...
Like a ship blown from its mooring
By a wind off the sea
Like a seed dropped by a skybird
In a distant wood-
Who can say if I've been changed for the better,
But because I knew you
Zuko: Because I knew you...
Both: I have been changed for good
Zuko: And just to clear the air, I ask forgiveness
For the things I've done you blame me for
Jet: But then, I guess, we know there's blame to share
Both: And none of it seems to matter anymore...
Zuko: Like a comet pulled from orbit...
Jet: Like a ship blown from its mooring
Zuko: As it passes a sun
Jet: By a wind off the sea
Zuko: Like a stream that meets a boulder
Jet: Like a seed dropped by a skybird
Zuko: Halfway throughout the wood...
Jet: In a distant wood-
Both: Who can say if I've been changed for the better?
I do believe I have been changed for the better
Zuko: And... because I knew you
Jet: Because I knew you
Both: I have been changed...
| Valana chapter 13 . 2/15/2014
Great ending! This fic was written well and I like how you wrote the characters. This whole story was excellent work!