|Reviews for Benevolent Monsters|
| Yukie chapter 1 . 3/12
Read the whole thing BRILLIANT!
Please keep writing _
| Nina Windia chapter 33 . 3/5
What a great chapter!
And you know I've been wondering for a while if Deis was going to turn up in this story. Great to see her. :D And I love how you used the scene from the fourth game for inspiration. Her identical blond hunks always make me crack up.
I'm trying to remember if I've asked you before what part of the series chronology this fic fits into it. I'm guessing after 1, since the dark and light dragons have (mostly) died off?
And finally! 32 chapters and those two dopes have finally admited it to one another. (talk about stubbornness lol) Such a good scene.
Uhhgggg and Ethan just gtfo.
| A chapter 33 . 3/3
Ryu is dam cocky *im a more aggressive species. You knw how excited I get during a spar. Would it be safe?* I get that he's looking out f'her but dammmm I couldn't stop laughing at how self obsessed he sounded hah! Like he thinks hes gunna be this wild lover hah like this fic dude it's awesome, I got too caught up in it to review every chapter so I just left it until the latest
| Guest chapter 33 . 3/2
Whoop woop! ***ryu in smart clothing*** adored the awkwardness. I keep forgetting ryu is supposed to be 25 and then he starts talking about 'vessels' like an old man haha I'm definitely liking the idea of a child between them though _ it would mean you'd have to keep this fic going eeeeeeeeeven longer!
| Angelalex242 chapter 33 . 3/1
One thought I had...
Maybe the reason the Kaiser keeps arguing against their mating is he's afraid he won't be able to possess the baby if Ryu mates with Nina. He'll be stuck with Ryu for the rest of his days. But if Ryu were to mate with a pure blooded dragon, Kaiser would be transferred to the baby as normal.
| Naraku sol chapter 33 . 3/1
Maaaaaaaaan Ethan's a little crap spinner isn't he 'you love me and always will love me' ryus gunna go mental for that ha
Wicked chapter pal you don't need me to tell you that though. Lol
Bit bummed Ethan turned up but it was about time he stirred the pot and wat better time to do it than in the middle of nina and ryu kissing haha kinda curious to how this is gunna turn out? Who knows maybe he wants to help nina now. NOT LOL
Glad the team is back opinion the same place although I'd still like nina to have some time with ryu before they get bombarded with questions from everyone.
Your wicked and this fic is awesome good job mate
| Sara-jl chapter 33 . 3/1
Ohhhhhh I had little tears in my eyes reading this update :) ryuuuuuuuu ohh wow! He was so amazing I can't believe nina finally got through to him yeeeeeeeeeeeeyy! Oh I'm just so pleased I can't stop reading this chapter, I keep going back to like 10 chapters ago when they first started to see eye to eye and it just makes me see how perfectly timed their relationship has been. No relationship happens in 5 minutes and it makes me so upset sometimes when I read fanfiction and people ruin their fics by rushing two characters into a relationship I just think it makes it so much more believable and entertaining when people take the time with their fics to make them the best they can by doing things like you've done with yours, not just taking the time with ryu and nina coming together but even things like giving characters accents and putting so much imagination into it this fic. I can't tell you how amazing it is but I'm sure by now you know you have written something very special for the BOF fans :)
I feel like I went off rambling there for a while haaha believe it or not I thoroughly enjoyed other things within this chapter too! First of all the dark dragon duo I think theyre so epic, slightly sad about Rowan but his death only made this chapter so much better sadly lol really glad to see gray again too hahaha he's a favourite of mine, can't wait for the group to set out on their journey together again, that's if their father lets them!
Ohh ryu... Sha'lei... My love.. I always knew you'd turn out to be a secret romantic! The next chapter is going to make me burst seriously I love him!
But then Ethan came and ruined the moment :( I always get scared when Ethan shows up, I know it won't be nice! I've been on edge for a while knowing you've been building up to this moment and I'm dreading what he will do! I hope it'll nina tells him where to go!
I'm nervous but excited for the next chapter!
| Fay chapter 33 . 3/1
Thank god! I've been trying to review for ages now but FF keeps going down so hopefully it'll last until I finish this! I bet you can imagine how pleased I am with what just happend eeeep! Oh wow after 31 chapters of angstyness and tension the barriers are finally down! I've got to admit I thought this chapter was going to be so different compared to the way it is, I honestly thought they'd be torn apart especially during those fighting scenes I thought ryu was gunna be left in a ditch whilst Axel and Rowan captured nina. But I have to say I'm so glad it didn't turn out that way, ryu and nina should at least admit their love before they're cruelly torn apart ;) it'll make everything so much more intense! Pretty pissed at Ethan right now! Why did he have to turn up at such a moment! I suppose with ryus luck it had to happen though didn't it? Haha I feel like Ethan is kind of insane, I just can't understand his obsession with nina now, he seems as though he just wants to be able to tell people he's fought her I mean is it a strength thing or does he actually have feelings for her I just have no idea? I like the fact that the group were reintroduced at a celebration :) it's just such a contrast to how we last saw kittah etc being dragged away by Ironsides :D I loved deis in BOF she was cheeky I'm excited to see if you keep her in the fic! As always you didn't let us down :) wonderful chapter I love ryu so much in this it just shows how loving he can really be, I hope he shares some more of his past with nina now :) awwwwwwwwwww I can't get over how they're in love now!
| Jen Im chapter 33 . 3/1
Fast update again I was not expecting that. I really enjoyed reading this new chapter. Axel and Rowan are two of my favourite characters so I liked their contribution to this chapter. Ethan finally returns, I see ryus control slipping soon. Great chapter
| BeautifulDusk chapter 33 . 2/28
AGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGH HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT LIKE THAT! Worst cliff hanger ever haha I really hope the next chapter is going to come quick! Ethan is starting to sound like a horrible horrible person I don't get what his game is.
Also this chapter made me laugh - poor Ryu. No baby vessels haha
Heres hoping there will be some fluff in later chapters heh heh.
| Aloo-Delilah chapter 33 . 2/28
Y'know how much I adore you right? :D SO MUCH!
Giiiiiiirl oh god!
Well it seems you've officially given yourself more to play with now in the form of ryu and nina post love confession! :D do you realise how much fun this will be, I love drama! you have no idea how ecstatic you've made me with this chapter!
I didn't think I could be more obsessed with your ryu cause y'know he's pretty dayuuuum fine! But WOW who knew he could be so loving and affectionate to nina, I was squealing at my screen it was so beautifully handled and ryu was so tender with her I just absolutely loved reading it :)
I know everybody's reaction will be 'ughhhhh Ethan you annoying little cockroach' but to be honest I've been dying for him to show up again just because I know how much damage he can do with just a few words :) he's a pretty epic character if you take the fact that nina used to fancy him out of the equation heehee! Makes me think that nina could possibly be reunited with her little sister now too soon ... I bet that would bring up some memories for ryu, I would love for him share some of those with nina now that he has a closer and more trusting relationship with her, I just want him to be happy! Come on nina you finally have him don't let smelly Ethan hurt him!
Can I just say how much I adore your dark dragon characters! :) up until now they've been pretty calm and cool but Jesus they showed their true colours in this chapter didn't they?! Literally ruthless killing machines I was so worried about ryu during those fight scenes I just thought this is it... This is where they are going to be separated! :o thank god you decided to take a different direction!
Loving this fic as per usual and soooooooooooo SOOOO SOO looking forward to see ryu and nina awkwardly trying to figure out what 'two people in love do' heeheehee! Miss AngelKitty you are a star girl!
| Nina. W chapter 33 . 2/28
It's wonderful to finally see ryu and nina together now. Not only that but the group seems to have rejoined too. I wonder how their new relationship will effect the dynamics of the groups now? I imagine ryu will be too shy to show his affections in front of others so hell just want to be with nina. I really enjoyed the fighting with the dark dragons, it reminded me of just how powerful and frightening the kaiser can be. So deis's sister (Nyna) wants the power of the kaiser then? I'm intrigued to learn more about this and maybe find out shy she wants it? I immediately thought back to when she used to use ryus sister to force him todo terrible things, could that have all been to gauge the power of the kaiser before she took if for herself?
Brilliant chapter as usual and interested more than ever to see where it's going to go next
| Enigma-star chapter 33 . 2/28
Oh my deary me! Just wow!
I can't believe this is just a fanfic sometimes. It's very rare, and very pleasing to find a story this well rounded and of such high quality.
The real-world occurrences that you incorporate into the story is almost as emotionally taxing on the reader as it is the character.
So happy now that ryu and nina have been broken down to admitting what they have both been feeling. I had to force my self not to skip a few lines just to get to the inevitable confession. Haha and oh my gosh I can't believe how loving ryu can be!
I'm very excited to see where you take the fic now that we have a beautiful couple to follow around, this just has to change things! Even the way they interact is going to change now so its like you've completely changed the things without.. Actually changing.. Anything... If you get me? It's fab though I'm so excited to see the change in their relationship now although first we need to deal with the annoying pest that is Ethan shooooooo!
Thank you for the update again AngelKitty!
| Miss Eloise chapter 33 . 2/27
ARGH THE CLIFFHANGERS THEY HURT! Quick, bring me some Ryu/nina to make it OK again! bring us that you did!
ETHAN NOOOOOO! That's it, let me at him, LET ME AT HIM! *held back by 11 year old* I'm gunna kick him in his ovaries sheeeeshhh!
I was literally flipping out the entire time I was reading this! OMGGGGGG and like myself I'm sure everyone is saying, FINALLYYYYYY! I've spent 31 chapters yelling at my screen! Nina! Well done for being the one to lose it first and blert out you love ryu, I can now stop letting my mind go insane with thinking about how it will happen!
This chapter was the perfect build up for that ending. THAT ENDING MY GOD! I can't get over it, seriously can you see my blush right now? Ryu didn't half drown her in the love and kisses there didn't he! ... BUT I LIKE IT! *little devil pops up on shoulder*
YES! You are a bossalicious writer! That opinion has only been intensified by like a bazillion now!
I can't get over this! RYU SERIOUSLY! YOU BETTER NOT SCREW THIS UP YOU ANNOYINGLY DIFFICULT YET GORGEOUS MAN!
And holy hot dog! Does this mean nina is finally gunna get little izzy back?!
Okay I have a problem again... See you just updated, and now, I just want.. More OKAY! Sheesh I know it's greedy but don't write such intense awesomeness then!
... Love you kay?
| Ryu-fan264 chapter 33 . 2/27
...…... Hold on... Give me an hour whilst I just pick up my jaw!
Hoooooooooooly mother of what just happened! Am I awake right now!? :D do we finally have a couple not in denial?! YEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAHHHHH!
Okay before I get serious I just have to say I was pee-ing my pants off when Axell was like 'ABORT LIMB' hahahaha so funny man I love how the dragon armour allows the user to do that!
Now... Where do you want me to begin cause I have no idea you absolute BEAUT!
Okay I'm just gunna start with ryu and nina cause serious like how could I not man! By the way I loved the ending it was freakin awesome bringing Ethan back at the worst time he could ever possibly turn up was genius! I just hope ryu pushes him off the balcony... What?! I was enjoying the love there ;)
Haha their awkward conversation about 'mating' and 'lovemaking' had me howling hahaha! Nina was well up for it! But in all seriousness I think you've done amazing with the build up to this moment where they finally let go and accept their feelings! I'm super glad you played it out for so long cause it just made this moment all that more epic! I also like the fact that this just seems like a new adventure for them now I mean seriously man I thought they were gunna get captured and thrown in the dungeons for Nyna to do with as she pleased but I'm gob smacked at how you actually decided to play out this chapter! I never thought for a second ryu and nina would be on the run again! But I'm happy! This means even more suprises in store for me since I have no idea where your takin us now my friend!
But all in all Ryu... You beast! Finally you get the girl! Just don't let Ethan kidnap her please?!
Next we have deis and Maria! Seriously why has my guessing for the updates been so off?! I'm really loving where this is going man I mean i don't even know what to say anymore in these reviews (still lifting jaw up from ground position) MARIA?! Man, it just reminds me that this is classic breath of fire and not your stand alone novel like seriously that's what I consider this now.. It's that incredible!
Super excited that the gang have been reunited again haha I missed grays antics and I'm glad nina can have someone to confide in once again... Although with the way things are going with Ginger Ethan could they be split again? Ooooooooooo the plot thickens...
I have so much I wanna say but I have no idea where to start and my jaw is taking a hell of a time moving back into place!
Just gunna give a shout out for the awesome fight scenes too mate! I always love the way you write them, it always brings me back to the times where they'd be in that big open field and ryu decapitates Ethan's leg... I kinda hope and recommend you do that again pretty pweaseee?
Okay I'm gunna stop for real now even though I have so much more I wanna say I fear I might take up too much review space gosh darn it!
Ryu/nina couple now in love _ GOLD
The fact that Nyna is kinda Maria_GOLD
Merybel showing up_GOLD
SERIOUSLY RYU AND NINA ADMITTING THEY LOVE EACH OTHER, KISSING, AWKWARDNESS OF NEW LOVE, 'MATING', THE POSSIBLE ASSASSINATION OF ETHAN IM HOPING FOR... SUPER GOLD PLATINUM DIAMOND YOU NAME IT AND YOU CAN HAVE IT!
Your not going to hate me for being so hyper and excited are you?
Your the man!
... Jaw is still not intact