Reviews for Secrets
DancingBear chapter 15 . 8/6
Aww, I loved this and the plot line
Maritza92 chapter 15 . 4/10
If you ever consider continueng this story i would love to read it. It is one of the best storys I have ever read on fanfic.
Guest chapter 15 . 12/8/2016
save your shitty long ass lies! bitch ass
LOLZZZZ chapter 8 . 8/28/2016
Awwww so sweet
shijiro chapter 8 . 1/15/2016
again facts mixed up pretty bad. goku didnt wake up after cell absorbed 17 and fought vegeta, he woke up before. goku was the one to suggest the hyperbolic time chamber good story though the reveal happeni g quick but ur explanations need work. also i dont see why u have sharpner and erasa show up every now and again just to blow them off. just ignore them like the anime did or let them become good trusted friends and learn some stuff too theyre just useless and it just shows how videl doesnt give two shits about her so called only friends for the longest time and how gohan really doesnt care to make more friends just doesnt feel right never did in the anime either. videl just dropped those two to jump into gohans world leaving them to fade from exsitence some friend right
shijiro chapter 3 . 1/15/2016
not just details of the battle but many of ur dbz facts are quite off. first of ur geography of the dbz world is way off. korin tower for one is in the north west quute a bit passed west city. of course west cith is in the west which makes satan city from the east quite far out. so them goin to west city mall in car and not taking long is unrealistic same with videl visiting korin tower so quickly. essentially those two locations are on the opposite side of the world. the dagonball wikia search under earth and theres a good world map to use as reference. also its been stated in dragonball that a rocket cant reach the top of kori tower because it would run out of feul thats why the legend is impossible to prove. later u find out the guardian of the earth does it so people go through the official test. its a test to find heros of a generation. bulma only did it during cell saga because there was no guardian of the earth at that time. lastly any video of saiyan saga was cut off after nappa whiped out the camera crews when they stopped fighting to wait for goku for three hours. so piccolos death would not have been witnessed, also the saiyans went to the z fighters not the other way around. those last ones are minor. but i just cant handle when people royally screw up locations. not sure why but it makes the world seem too small like everything important ever only happened in one part of the world
Rebmul chapter 14 . 12/7/2015
hope to see this one day continued
gabelou1991 chapter 15 . 7/2/2015
J'ai bien aime dommage qu'il n'est pas de suite.
Animefangirl365 chapter 5 . 8/3/2014
okay, I do want to say one thing; Goku did know that his Grandpa died, but his grandpa told him not to go outside on a full moon, for a "terrible beast" will appear; Grandpa Gohan didn't have the heart to tell Goku the full truth.
Animefangirl365 chapter 3 . 8/3/2014
ahh! this is so exciting! I love this! :D
Guest chapter 15 . 3/12/2014
Love it can't wait to see who those characters are and what about the sharperner bashing
Pizzadude5665 chapter 11 . 11/1/2013
pendulum room idea was great
dragonsoul11 chapter 12 . 10/31/2013
huh? who is this girl?
Rebmul chapter 15 . 9/11/2013
interesting story look forward to ur next update
xX.super.Xx chapter 15 . 5/2/2013
Please continue!
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