Reviews for The Choice
Aria Breuer chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
Good poem.

I was thinking about how Shmi missed her son Anakin when reading through this poem. It also reminded me of the tone poems back in 1998 that were on television as commercials for 'Episode I - The Phantom Menace'.

Good work.

-Aria Breuer
Azalea.Rose chapter 1 . 9/15/2010 good job you showed Shmi's point of veiw well.
Cerulean City chapter 1 . 8/17/2009

May the force always be with you,]

Isn't the Force always capitalized?

Will it allow you to depart?]

So she's telling him to go and then turns around and asks him if he will? Confused. Might want to watch that.

But aw it's cute! And very IC. Shmi has this weary tone. I like it.

Good job.

"May He Thunder Forever!"

Shiner Shining Bright chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
That's sweet, full of warmth.
gamefreek321 chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
Another good poem, and I like the rhyme scheme! Good job again. Do I get another cookie? :)