Reviews for disturbing enough
Keiri Kurosukara chapter 1 . 7/27/2014
purplesapphire17 chapter 1 . 3/15/2014
OH MY GOD that was so funny I couldn't stop laughing at the end I'm still laughing
claraowl chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
AHAHAHAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaa...
"right" not "rite"
capitilization, etc.
I liked it, though. :D
KandHforever chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
Flame? No way. This is pretty awesome...I could picture it and it made sense. just about the only problem I saw was a few places were you put 'his' were you were talking about Haruhi, but that isn't major. It's a good story!
crazygrasshopper chapter 1 . 12/13/2009
Poor Tamaki / I like it so far! Please continue.
AbsoluteAddiction-x chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
LOL! xD!

Trust Kyoya to be there, ready with a video camera xD

Made me laugh A LOT -underlines 'A LOT'-

Well done; if this is your "sloppy" work, i can't wait to see what you class as good! ;D
Scherherazade chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
The idea is good but the story doesn't quite flow, needs a little refining. Keep writing.
Death-Angel-of-Anime chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
AHAHA! That is totally hilarious, and I know the situation was serious, it was just do dang funny!:) Hurry and update so I can read some more!
Loma-chan chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
lol I thought it was pretty good actually. Write more.. I was laughing my butt off!
Celeste Belle chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
It's a nice story. But you should go back and fix the spelling/grammar mistakes.
Icetiger 13 chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
lol lol lol lol omg I loved that. Hillarious XD

Cant wait for updates!