Reviews for Now You're Gone
LittleSparrowFlewAway chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
-sniffle sniffle- That was... -chokes- ...so sweet... -sobs hysterically- ... and touching! Normally at this point I'd be jumping up and down exitdetly because I found another Shugo Chara fan but I can't get over how totally beautiful that was!
True Colours chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
That was too heart-rending! Seriously, really emotional and moving. I loved the little interaction between Kish and Pai in the flashback.

There were a few small errors, for example you need to make sure you use possessive apostrophes, e.g. his girlfriend's shoulder. You also need to watch out for your/you're. But this is just minor grammar, on the whole well done and I really liked the way you described Pai reassuring Lettuce during the birth, and the way you described them in the photo.
Essence of Gold chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
*choke* *sob* That was *gasp* beautiful! *breaks down*

Seriously, though, if that doesn't win I don't know what will! XD

Izzy
SparkSparta chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
Bittersweet. Nice story Jazz-san!
Saba's Reflection chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
Kawaii! _