Reviews for Deadly Beauty
S. J. Reneau chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
For some reason, I can't help but think that the voice of this poem belongs to either a succubus or something a little more abstract, like a drug addiction (succubus was the first thing to pop into mind, though addiction seems more likely). Either way, this was a pretty intriguing piece. I can almost literally hear this being said in a seductive tone with just the slightest hint of smug gloating. If the inspiration ever does come back, it would be interesting to see some more in this vein, perhaps some of the other characters' thoughts on whatever is happening to Warp. :)
nopegonefromhere chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
That was pretty good. Nice job
KJ17 chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
Wow...That really was dark and intriging! I'd like to see more.
Queen S of Randomness 016 chapter 1 . 8/6/2009

interesting idea. it's worth continuing. - :)