Reviews for On the Run
Motherof8 chapter 15 . 5/12
Good story. Thanks
Motherof8 chapter 13 . 5/12
That was intense
Motherof8 chapter 12 . 5/12
That was cute
Motherof8 chapter 8 . 5/12
Bella sure is spunky...or some might say
Motherof8 chapter 6 . 5/12
Can't believe irina
Motherof8 chapter 3 . 5/12
I guess she should forgive him
Motherof8 chapter 1 . 5/12
Good story.
harrytonkslover2216 chapter 9 . 2/3/2014
I hate that no one seems to see that Edward is justified in his over protection of his mate that is still human and that Bella makes horrible choices for herself. Leaving to go back with Alice who is by far one of the weakest fighters was a slap in the face to Edward. He should have been more upset with her. She doesn't deserve him with her constant selfish actions she never really considers him. Just that she knows he will eventually just give her everything she wants and forgive her for her foolishness.
Kristin04 chapter 16 . 8/27/2011
I love your story. I don't know if what ice been reading the last two days if they were the redrafts. Either way, it was a great read but had hoped there would've been more to it. That's just me, though. I look forward to seeing more from you. As always. I encourage you to keeP moving forward with your endeavors.
twirob chapter 16 . 7/2/2011
does this mean start reading this from the beginning?
twirob chapter 9 . 10/6/2010
this story is fantastic
Alexmaxcullen chapter 6 . 11/2/2009
i like the story but it's kinda confusing goin from 1 point of view to the nxt you need to put a heading who talkin bt a part from dat great story.
Gottverdammit chapter 15 . 10/23/2009
I love it, keep it up.

-Lacey
ClaudiaMMR chapter 15 . 10/8/2009
loved it !
ClaudiaMMR chapter 10 . 10/8/2009
i loved it !
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