Reviews for Captive of a Bartender
nermalasu chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
that was f'ing hot as hell! great story!
Ophelia1983 chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
I was on the verge of screaming his name too while I was reading this! ;-)
candicexoxo1 chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
Oh my God that has to be the most x hottest thing I ever read and I loved every minute of it seriously. I am sitting my dest in my office and I feel like I'm getting so aroused by this really great again! You rule!
MizzKLUTZ101 chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
That was great i loved every second of it i love your other storys 2 :)
ClancyJane chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
Tanya... thanks for letting me know about this little treasure - yum !

so HOT HOT HOT it is such a pity its a one shot *whoa i'm still spinning*

i NOW have you on alert so i dont miss anything else : )

Bec

x
Linzzer220 chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
SO. Fucking. Hot.! I'm literally speechless. This was def. a great one-shot! So much passion and so much...ungh! love it :)
askjdgf chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
SMOKIN! I'm off to take a cold shower! Great story!
crashluva chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
This was the hottest one shot hands down! Great job
sunshinyme chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
holy smokes, that was hot! i LOVE DTE!
secamimom chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
WOW! That was all kinds of hot! i loved it!
PhoenixRising25 chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
Very hot! Awesome job :-)

xoxo Sarah
notnormaljusthuman chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
Oh, that was good. That was very, very good. Wetward indeed ;)

~ash~

x x x x
Super Panda Girl chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
wonderful! lucky bella! I wish he would take me captive!
twilightknight09 chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
Wow...I'll take what she's having!
Megi-B chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
I'm so glad they're using sunblock since they're both so pale ;)

Really hot...just one little thing chest muscles are 'pecs' not 'pecks' Other than that it certainly was hot.
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