Reviews for Youth Corrupted
Above the Winter Moonlight chapter 1 . 12/20/2016
Poor Allen. Cross really is a tyrant but this was a rather interesting and funny oneshot. Good job.
NekoYullenMidnightKitsune chapter 1 . 10/7/2014
Next time you do a one-shot, can you add a little bit of "matureness" to it, please?
mamita chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
Hello, I really liked your fic, I like the couple CrossxAllen, which is bad Cross, hopefully do more fics of them is so good, thanks and kisses.
AbaratFox chapter 1 . 9/25/2010
Allen Walker; Nice idiot or deranged card shark?
Arceus the Creator chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
this was funny.
Cindar chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
that was funny
p3paula chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
I think he did make full use of gambling.. XD XD

soo fun...


poor Allen and his past..
Crosseine chapter 1 . 1/4/2010 comment...just like it...


question! if Allen can be that good at playing poker, though he's cheating, and Cross is his master...wouldn't it mean that Cross also good at gambling, even cheating, right?

Poor Allen, he have to work for his master...

like it!
FallenHope-Angel chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
ah~ poker allen is so kawai i just love hima dn well cross is evil at times b;ut i stil love him too.
14th Noah chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
Great representation of the relationship Allen shares with Cross.
LyssiBug chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
Poor Allen, on top of not training him his master took all of his money. this little fic was so funny.

jokerlove chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
lols! Its so Allen and Cross, perfect. I loave how Allen doesn't quite realize that Cross does all these things on purpose, perfect timing my ass! I wish for more talk between Cross and Allen, but hey can't have the moon. I really liked it, put a smile on my face.


mysticwolf1896 chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
ooh, you wrote a fic for -man! yay! (tosses you a cookie) this story was so wonderful, i felt so bad for poor allen. cross really did make his life a living hell but he picked up a useful skill as result. and you were right, he really is lucky that he survived his training. great job and keep it up.

Kame-tan chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
:D...very appropiate title. Nice story