|Reviews for Illumination|
| Alice Carter chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
Beautifully crafted, heart-wrenching.
| MileyHannahFan chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
Wow! Great story! The flicking from one point to another was done very well. It was easy to keep up with them both, well done.
| Firenze.Sun chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
I was actually searching for transcripts to Asylum when I found your profile.
And this story... so sad... you made me cry...
| TeBlacks chapter 1 . 2/4/2012
Good job! I really like how you molded together the two story lines it gave the story a beautiful depth.
Keeo writing, you're good at it.
| xPhoenix0Returnx chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
I love the way you wrote this. Honest, it was beautiful. (Yes, even if it /was/ Ianto's death...) It's so sad, the way he died. I can't believe that RTD would do this.
But this was amazing: the way you took parts and broke it up and then put it back together. 3
| chironsgirl chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
You know, when CoE comes on Space channel, I need to have two bottles of Australian white to get through it. I have to be sozzled by the end of Day 3. Just to get through Day 4 and 5. Sigh.
| brionyjae chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
*sobs* Everytime I watch this scene, I can't help crying! oh WHY RTD! *pouts and sulks*
Wow, I checked out your fanart page, and you are such a mean drawer! 'Tis not fair that some people can both write AND draw ;) hehe. Lucky thing :P Also loved your profile, definitely the most original one I've come across so far :)
| captain-ally chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
This story made me cry more than any fiction I have ever read before. It is utterly beautiful, and you should be so damn proud of it.
Gorgeous, one of the best stories I have EVER read, and could ever hope to write.
I seriously hope you know how talented you are. Amazing, seriously. x
| kausingkayn chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
He never answered the question.
| darkdranzer chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
um. wow this is amazing. i like how you incorporated the death scene with your other event. it's really sad. nicely done.
| rain angst chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
I really like the style you used for this and find it to be quite heartbreaking. Jack never did, fully, answer the question, but this is still beautifully done. I haven't watched that episode yet, but I already knew what happened. Great job with this, made me want to cry.
| Orion Lyonesse chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
Oh, nicely done!
Loved the counterpoint of the two scenes and your version of Ianto's death. Especially good was lighting both scenes in red light.
"Furnished pipe"? Is that what we call a railroad or shotgun apartment, usually at the top of a house, with each room leading only to the next room, front door to back? A startling image, when I first read it! Seems I'm destined to learn lots of new words while reading your lovely prose.
Jack never did answer Ianto's question in the one scene. Think Jack's allergic to anything like that, unless forced. Too bad, too, as he really does need to take Ianto seriously. That's the facade he hides behind, probably crying all the time, in loneliness, in the dark.
Sorry I can't add you to my author favorites for this one, 'cause you're already there! But I can add the story to my favorites.
| Ravenja70 chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
what a wonderful, sad story. I liked how you mixed past and present together, with both the dialogue and the colours
| BlueSouledShadowDragon chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
Darn you! You made me cry! I was looking for fluff and I found this! Beautifully written, and oh-so sad. *Applauds*
| endiahna chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
Glad to see the reference to juliet. that is what I saw when I watched the show, it was a little bit romeo and julietish.
Very good piece here, very sad. Liked how it flpped back and forth and intertwined with the past and present.