Reviews for Withering the Ferns |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story is terrific. I can’t wait to read it again |
![]() ![]() ![]() Always so good |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story so much! I adore both Bella and Edward, they are funny and sweet. Thank you so much for sharing. |
![]() ![]() "has seen it's fair share of unkind attention" IT'S is the contraction for IT IS or IT HAS. ITS is the possessive form. It's LIGHTNING, not LIGHTENING. |
![]() ![]() "jaws taught" It's TAUT. |
![]() ![]() "Edward's face is blanched and taught" It's TAUT. |
![]() ![]() It always amuses me to read a story where a major character is accused of a crime and can't manage to find a competent attorney to prove his/her innocence. If Edward, a teenager, can manage to figure out his father was framed, why couldn't his father's defense lawyer? If Carlisle believed the lawyer was corrupt, couldn't he have found one in Seattle? It seems early on that money wasn't an issue, so surely he could hire someone to defend him against trumped up charges. I know, I know - drama! But, c'mon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The author has a very pleasant slogan, it was easy and pleasant to read, despite some heavy topics. Thank you for this incredible story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I so hate it... If someone walks like a duck, acts like a duck.. Must be a duck.. Bella is not a nice person as far as I have seen so the assumptions levied against here aren't off base. |
![]() ![]() A happy ending and a lot of fun Thanks for your time Regards LQUEZ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I'm glad someone recommended it! I couldn’t stop reading it till the end, I wish there were more chapters Thanks for sharing your work! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy shit |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cock blocker |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh shit |
![]() ![]() ![]() Craziness |