Reviews for It Will Take More Than That
James chapter 1 . 8/12/2016
I was always confused by this scene. She makes this staement but by saying 'It will take more than THAT' she seems to be implying that something which has already happened would not be enough to...well do whatever.

Thus she probably should have said "It will take more than THIS".

Ive since learned that in the book the bastards shoot her first in the neck but somehow she manages to speak and say 'It will take more than that'. After which they shoot her through the head. Even Amon's reply 'Im sure youre right' doesnt really make sense. I think the word 'that' should have been ultimately switched with 'this'.

Great writing btw
RedJulius chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
That's a damn good story! I like the build-up and the whole double meaning at the end there.
SapereAude03 chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
Wow. Powerful story. Very well done. ~Jess
FFww2reviewerJC chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
Wow, a bit despressing, but great writing!
Conquistidora chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
Absolutely beautiful, well done