Reviews for Abandoned Lover
rv chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
Thank you for writing I am doing a similiar kind of piece for my project about when she left at the end of splendour. Really good. And even though its a poem about feelings you seem to round it off and a mini plot and capture the story within. The only thing that frustrated me a tiny bit was the fact everything rhymned- you don't need too rhyme it all, just make sure that it flows otherwise IT WAS AWESOME! :o
TheNineMuses chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
This was pretty good. Good job!