To find a story like this one with only 300-something reviews, i can not understand. It deserves to be up there among the 10k one's, truly.
This is a true gem and GOD how i wish it was finnished. I hate that i have to let this one go, it kind of makes me want to cry. :')
I will follow this one in the hopes you will find your way back here to this fantastic story someday. 3

I just found your " little fic" and have read all you have posted. Is there more somewhere else? Did you publish it and that is why I can't find it? Please let me know as I think it is very good and would really like to read more if possible. Thanks - .

I don’t know if you’re still working on this story, but I just finished all of the current chapters in one happy binge reading and I would love to see more of it!

I took a break from reading, because I felt the impulse to say it straight: This, so far, is an amazing read. The characters all feel very well fleshed out and, while still keeping the general traits constant, has made them all so much more likable. There may be some medical mistakes (a pet peeve of mine), but these really do not detract from the general story. Even though I have absolutely no experience or knowledge of warfare or flying, the background information and action sequences are never overwhelming or overbearing and make me interested in reading more literature regarding this topic. Brava!

Hello?! Anyone there?
I see you haven't updated for awhile. I've grown to really start to like this story. So I was just wondering if you were still planning on updating any more chapters?

Keep going, please!

Your story reminds me of the Xmen.

I'm not quite sure, but I think I forgot to mention my fondness of the way u make it a point to give credit to everyone whom you've borrowed from.

The end of this chapt , got me so anxious . I wish I reader power-rights , so I could just zap Royce outta this story . Just as well , his little bro makes me nervous but I hope he turns out to be one of those really nice but rough exterior type boys for the sake of little Ellie And her mom. While I'm still here, just wanna put it there that I've fallen in love with the way you're writing this story and pretty much all the charcters(reg. and new)

... Except for Rosalie .

While I've understood WHY she done everything so far , I still don't think it JUSTIFIES most of her actions so far . But that's just my opinion. Whichreallydoesntmatter.

But anywhoo... Amazing chapt (AGAIN) . So go ON whichyo bad self
.. Too much?! :D

Before I forget , can u clear one thing up for me? why would the Rose's place be in 'trouble' if Royce is the one that stole the money from it?

I'm just have to say I'm really diggin this 'fire-kinetic' chic's 'tude .

Holy ish! It's like watching a freakin series ... Except u know , ur .. Errr... reading .. it. Ahmazing, thank you.

Please finish the story, I wanna see what happens with Edward and bella

Very nice

You have a wonderful imagination, alas you haven't updated. Hope you are well.

i stopped reading at 42 simply because i realized this story has not been updated in nearly a year. I don't mind waiting... in most cases and realize that this is not your life but cannot imagine how you can go a year without doing anything with this. Great story. I look forward to reading all of it. I will make sure to add all 44 reviews to your count cause by god you deserve them... even if you haven't updated in a year. hahahaha