Hi,
This story is one of my favourites and I've followed it for a really long time. I was wondering if you planned on continuing it? I understand if you're not. It is such a great story though and in my opinion I don't understand why it hasn't had more reviews. Maybe it hasn't been found easily? Or not many people rec'd it?
I just thought I'd let you know you're talent is very much appreciated and I would be ecstatic if this story was finished. :)
Thanks,
Rhianna

I thought they could only die by fire. Wouldn't the hunters be able to live through getting their heads removed since it was implied that vamps could survive that when Jasper did similar things to his trainees... great story by the way :-)

Fabulous!

I agree with the others, your story is vastly under-reviewed. I love your original take on the whole vampire story, it makes this an exciting read, one I couldn't stop! I pretty much read this all in one weekend, and I was very snappy with anyone who interrupted my enjoyment of this! Bravo to you! Looking forward to more! :)

OK, I read this when you published it, but I didn't review because I needed to go back and read the last Rosalie chapter to remind myself of some of the details. I FINALLY did that, and read this chapter again. Whew!

I can't help but think Royce is behind the murders of his parents. He probably wanted control of their businesses or just to get them out of the way for some reason. He can blame it on the resistance, but I don't think it was them. Maybe, but I just have a hunch. I would imagine Riley was supposed to die with the rest of the family.

Let's hope Carlisle's solution (pun intended) works on Ellie.

Clearly Christopher has a thing or two against vampires. Did he know what happened to Ellie's mother?

Anyway, great chapter. Looking forward to the next one!

j'adore. Unfortunately mostly underreviewed.

I think it's one of the best fantastic plot I have ever read. Le suspense me tient en haleine. Je me régale de la complexité des interconnexions entre les personnages. Bravo

Wow, what a chapter! Poor Ellie. Although she and her father are not close, I really felt bad for him.

Carlisle's suggestion to Rosalie about healing Ellie was very interesting. I'm wondering how this will all turn out.

Thanks!

I've sat on my couch for the past...two or three hours, reading through all of the chapters up til the last one. I've had to shift positions every five minutes to relieve the growing ache in my ass from staying in one position for too long. I refused to stop reading your story and even now, my laptop is down to 9% battery and I just refuse to get the fuck up and get my charger because your story is so fucking amazing and I HAD to review. So if that doesn't get my point across, maybe this will...

OMFG THIS IS JUST AAHHHHHHHH! IT'S LIKE - LIKE - FUCKING AMAZING! I am in awe of your skillz (and that's right, I spelled it "skillz" with a "z." 'Cause you're just that awesome). It's just...one of the best things I have come across in quite a while. Will you marry me so that I can get rights over this fic, too?

*clears throat* yes, now that THAT is done with, let's see...your plot is just wow. It's simple yet so fucking complex and there's so much shit in there so there's never a dull moment. By simple I mean that there is a plot there for the reader to follow, buried deep beneath all the angst and drama. So a reader won't be completely blindsided if a fucking pink unicorn decides to pop up because somewhere along the line, you've hinted at its appearance. I don't think that makes much sense, but oh well. It's the best I could come up with. By shit I mean these fantastic details and POV's that just leave me wanting for more (and for a fucking gun so I can shoot the sons of bitches that dare mess with Edward and Alice and Eleanor and just basically all the cool people, ESPECIALLY Tanya). I don't think there's much left for me to say. High quality work you've got here. Great job. Update soon!

SPREAD THE LOVE, SPREAD THE PEACE , AND SPREAD THE TWILIGHT!

That sounds ominous!

I actually really enjoyed this chapter. I think I'm starting to like Rosalie better.

Can't wait for another update!

Duh, dun duuunnnnnnnn! Lol!

The Furies involved do not give me that warm and fuzzy feeling. This should be very interesting. I would suspect they are in town to get to the bottom of these attacks and weed out who was behind it. Woe be unto the ones responsible, the Furies are horrific in their judgement process.

I love the changing POV's, especially Rosalie's. I hate that she has to see Royce. I still hope she kills his ass!

On another note, I'm curious about Eleanor and her father's strained relationship...it has to be over her mom. I hope that Christopher will listen to Carlisle in helping Eleanor.

Another awesome chapter!

Who are "The Furies"?

eep? this doesn't sound good. I like Riley I hope he doesn't turn out to be like Royce. Thanks for the update, can't wait to see what happens on the rebellion side. ;) LOL I like this Rosalie she's cool.

As always and awesome update.

Words cannot express how much I LOVE this story! You are an amazing writer and I hope you'll update soon! :D D :D D

Greetings! I hope all is well with you.

I was so excited to see this update in my inbox. And what a chapter - wow, it was so heartbreaking.

The silent exchange between B and E, the footage of Carlisle and Rosalie...I was stunned. The chapter was so powerful and well written. Thank you :)

Another suspenseful and wonderfully written chapter, jazsqr.

I hope Bella & Edward's private "conversation" will not be found out by the machine she was attached to and by Harrison.

She has to get him out of there...they have to survive. Please.

And speaking of surviving...Royce! WTH? I was so hoping that asshole would have been made into kibbles and bits after the attack. I hope Rose can out wit him and maybe kill his ass!

Anyway, great chapter and worth the wait. Come back soon...okay? Lol.