Reviews for Awakening |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Dr. Singh's ramblings were very funny. Poor guy. After doing my Masters thesis in Organic Chemistry back in 2006/2007, and being stuck in a lab for way too many hours, I understand his lack of social skills and sympathize with him :) Although I don't think I'm that bad because my friends and family would've slapped me by now LOL. I really enjoyed Bella's discussion with Dr. Sun. Dr. Sun's perspective on her work was very interesting, and I also liked the inclusion of philosophers and physicists, as well as their theories and deaths. And now Bella is finally going to see Edward. This is going to rival Steve McQueen's "Great Escape!" LOL. I wonder what Dr. Harrison picked up on Bella via Nessie ... (which, by the way, was a hilarious addition to this story). Wonderful chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter! Please update soon :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aaaaargh! Cliffy! Actually, I secretly enjoy the odd cliffy every now and then. How you come up with this stuff- I have no idea, but I'm loving every minute of it! Do you have an idea of how long it will be in total? |
![]() ![]() ![]() aghhhh exciting! cant wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gah! I so need to know what's going on with Edward! At least he has one thing going on for his side: he's unique. And being unique means he has to be kept alive, so whatever they are doing to him, they have to keep that in mind. Which does lead me to this: if Jasper, Lucy and Alice show up, two of who are several decades old, and all who have a talent, then Edward would be screwed... Because when one is not unique, then one can be spare... I'm terribly curious about how they managed to get hold of vampires. I thought Edward had been a fluke, and to some extent he was, so how would they have caught a vampire? I'm also very interesting in what they have found about what venom does. Very nice explanation about their skin too! It makes me wonder what Carlisle would be able to contribute if he were on their side. Come back soon! Misha |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! Glad your back and updated, I missed this story. I think that something is up with Bella but he isn't sure just what it may be. I also think the only reason Harrison is taking Bella to see Edward is to analyze them. I hope Bella is able to get Edward out soon. The Asylm is creapy... Good work...Thank you for sharing this story with us I hope you can update soon... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I truly hope Edward is okay. The anomaly Dr. Harrison found tells me she is looking at what makes Bella the powerhouse the Volturi are afraid of and the good doctor does not see that...yet. I personally feel that Dr. Sun knows something is up with Bella and she might let Bella see Edward only to evaluate how Bella & Edward react to each other. You paint a hopeless picture with this asylum - the description of it interior and the scientific names...the implications of torture and darker designs. Very well written. My skin crawled. lol. I really enjoyed the build up to E&B seeing each other and hope they can get out of there alive. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow..i missed this story i cant wait to see bella go to edward! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic characterizations of the scientists in this chapter, and I love how you've thought out so many details that others don't. Still a captivating tale; thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was going to leave a smart-ass review like: I read the warning and decided to skip this chapter, but the way it ended I can't. Because I'm just...omdugshdbwgdyub sjwnsksndj xsisjcbjsdsbc! Randomly smacking my keyboard, that what I'm doing. I need more. Look what you've turned me into: a junkie! I think I'm going to fall into the mother of all depressions when this fic is over. I'll ave to go to rehab. Please update as soon as you can! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. Lots of technical stuff in there, but it didn't get bogged down because the characters were so interesting. Singh was so funny. His rambling reminded me a bit of a coworker. And Dr. Sun... boooo... hisssss... Harrison was an interesting young thing. And she's taking Bella to see Edward! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really do enjoy this story. It's well thought out and nicely executed ~~~~~Begin Rant~~~~ If Edward is not in the next chapter, you have offcially gone New Moon on us without A. The occaional word Edward paired with Bella somewhere in the test that we can skip foreward to, glance at think everything is okay and then realize bella is just a little schizo B. Jacob's smiles and ab muscles (not necessaruly in that order) Becasue at least SM through in the Wolf Pack (and all the fantasies therein) to distract me ~~~~End Rant~~~~ I really can't wait to see where you take this. Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this story, but i am absolutely positive you are trying to kill me with the duration between updates! oh, and i hope sun, that inhuman bi tch, gets hers, if you know what i mean. |
![]() ![]() What a hidden gem! I found your story and couldn't put it down - I love the characters, and you have managed to write an end-of-the-world story without making too horribly depressing. I'm eagerly awaiting your next update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am continually blown away by the artistry and effort put into this story. Thank you so much for sharing this with all of us! |