Reviews for On Lust and Carth Onasi
machievelli chapter 1 . 1/4/2014
Posted 3 January 2014, at the Starwarsknights web site and the Lucasforums Coruscant Entertainment Center in my The Critic's Two Cents.

KOTOR no specific location given: Thinking about Carth...

Revan here is trying to rationalize why her feelings are important without slipping into the dark side again. But it reminded me of the first rule of ceremonial magic. If you have to rationalize why you should get what you want, you are wrong...
Guest chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
I loved this story. it really shows the problems that can arise when love comes into the equation for the jedi.
obaona chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
Interesting fic - I really like how you have the Force be for Revan, the joy she sees in it, and her musings on lust/love, and the warning that it's dangerous. Very well thought out, I think.