What happened to Luna's Wizard, Vogue?

I thought Luna was 15 years old.

Wow sis. Talk about a girl stepping up to the plate! I think she is my favorite character. Well so far...if not Pat.

Nice first chapter! It's really gripping and pulls you in, it shows the relationship that the two have and how deeply they care for each other very nicely. A small bit of criticism I guess and that's that I find it a little hard to believe that kids that are about eleven can be that lovey dovey but then agin I haven't seen that kind of relationship before so I can't speak completely from experience. I just imagine that kids are a little more kid like, not really kissing and all I mean (that again may just be inexperience of those situations) but a nice beginning to this story and I'm really curious to read more.

i must say, I really like this and how you portraid the four guardians, however, I was reluctant to read this at first becasue i'm not a fan of Luna (not even after reading this) but the story overall was good, i'll continue to the sequel :) :)

aww, it's the end already? i wanted to hear "What am i fighting for!" XD

I heart this story.

Awesome! Luna as Zero? That's the coolest idea I've ever heard!
You put the Megaman Zero plot into Star Force so perfectly!
As if you're a staff of Capcom!

Great! I'll read the 2nd too!

Well, if you where to take the Megaman Zero story, and put in a Starforce format, this most definetly would be it. Hell, you probably just did Capcom Proud. I like some of the character concepts, and find myself tempted to draw them out.

I have been reading this for some time, and decided to review. This was a good story, and honestly, it felt like Star Force, despite the Zero references. I'm definitely reading the sequel.

An ideal ending for this fic! Can't wiat for the sequel to show up. Btw,are you going to have Geo and Omega-Xis pull one of their miraculous returns from the dead or are they done? just asking. Good luck on your upcomming work!

Woah, those were such awesome last chapters! Well worth the wait to make them perfect, I'd say. (And SoloXSonia too! Awesome! )

And the last part make me very happy. Does this mean, perchance, that there might be four Mega Man Star Force: Zero stories, or is that too much to hope for? "

Anyway, amazing chapter as usual, and I can't wait for the sequel!

Very good chapter. I am curious about the sequel. I wonder if Geo is dying. Is Luna really Human? Did she come from a another planet? I am also wondering who Luna's love interest will be with Geo out of the picture with no body. I keep wondering if romance between Luna and Xerox is possible.

Very interesting chapter. I wonder what the mystery about Luna's past is.

That was a good ending. I hope Luna/Zero returns to Earth. Though I wonder how Kelvin and Hope will take it that Geo is wandering as an EM Wave, unable to return home...

Anyway, I hope to see the sequel soon!