Reviews for Public Indecency
Guest chapter 1 . 12/26/2013
A fun read but nothing really stands out as Neuro. Nothing demonic or inhuman, which is a bit disappointing.
darkryubaby chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
I kinda wish there was more to this one or (and this is the pervert in me speaking...sorry) what if someone walks in on them once but Neuro being evil, doesn't stop, Yako doesn't even notice and the intruder, though grossed out, can't seem to leave or even look away. Like watching animal planet live. Haha, anyway, hope to see more from you soon. :)
heka chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
Read this hot sexy little number a few times and always couldn't remember if I reviewed. Squeee yes go go car sex! Awesome writing. Supremely yummy and jealous of Yako now XDDD cookies for you! Yay!
Glass Dragon chapter 1 . 11/30/2011
Lol, loved that it all started with just Yako grabbing Neuro's hand. wtf Neuro XD
iamthewerepire chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
Haha I would've loved to seen their faces when slave #2 came xD lol
tokiko76 chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
Oh my gosh. I swear...ughh, sooo sinful. I dunno how to explain, it gave me goosebumps and a whole lot of other things I suppose I can't write here. I just gotta say it left me longing for more. Great job. Wow. Just wow.
xSakuraRosesx chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
Wow! *has to fan herself* That was hot! Unlike me,you have a talent for writing sexy scenes like this. :)

And yes. Car sex rules! :D
DarkOtaku-Sama chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
Great job on the smut! durrhurr...

I would suggest that they do it in a bath tub next.
BANG chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
Awsome but question...

i dont get how they kiss cause you know neuros saliva(therefore mouth)is acidic...
KinkyEyepatchShit chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
That was so hot! and IC too!

Damn, I bet Godai shit a fucking elephant when he found them _
ginn chapter 1 . 1/8/2010
that was nice. now you should have him join in.
iRitsuko chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
Awh is that it I want more, I want to know what happen next when slave munber 2 showed up.
kitt90 chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
Wow it was really good! XD
GeneralCuster chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
Wonderful. Hot and steamy. Poor Godai. I feel so sorry for him.
kiiyu chapter 1 . 9/4/2009
i loved it. i need to go find some tissues to stop this nosebleed here...
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