Reviews for Harry Potter's Discovery
Josh chapter 5 . 8/20
Sorry but this is were I stop. The room of requirement doesn't created edibles unless they were already there, left in the room from people, which would've most likely gone bad and seeing how chakra pills aren't a real thing in the HP universe... Sorry but it ruins my immersion of the story if I'm think that's not true or that can't happen. (A city in the background? A wide room with targets and post to punch and kick would of been more likely, since he was want a place to train, not a wide open outside field with a city view with nonexisting supply's.)
Josh chapter 4 . 8/20
I'm. Gonna. Keep. Reading but Neville and Hermione learning kinda ruined it for me. Its cool because harry can do it, not everyone can do it.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/17
Ugh I honestly loved the concept but the moment you kept writing 'cartoon' and 'comic' i was so over it. It's ANIME and MANGA.
RenegadeForLife chapter 17 . 6/14
I liked it. It went fast but it was enjoyable. Didn't expect a 17 chapter fic to cover the whole story.
knuckles 8 chapter 17 . 4/28
I really liked to story
Iryelb chapter 17 . 3/28
I liked the story well enough but it just seemed kind of bare, like almost totally detail free.
Ash Lee Brodford chapter 17 . 3/22
this was so awesome!
Priya Ashok chapter 17 . 3/8
Thank you.
Rhino109 chapter 6 . 2/21
What happened to Quirrell then? I doubt he just disappeared from reality when Harry killed a troll. You're leaving quite a few plot holes in your wake.
Rhino109 chapter 4 . 2/20
This really needs to be beta read. You keep putting silly things like 'trough' instead of 'through' So it breaks down toHagrid led the group of new students over the lake and a pigs dinner plate the castle." Seems kinda silly XD
Rhino109 chapter 1 . 2/20
I see where you're going with it already and its kinda funny. Just thought I should point out the UK does not broadcast anime on air as we don't really broadcast any TV in different languages. Wish I could get SAO repeats on demand from my Virgin Media package XD
era-romance chapter 6 . 1/21
muton would have been a better choice for Neville
SSSra chapter 17 . 12/17/2016
another great story that was well written and well planned out.
Bronze chapter 5 . 10/27/2016
Gee, who would've guessed that Vernon could actually learn that it was extremely hazardous to his health to abuse Harry?!
Mumia0813 chapter 17 . 8/9/2016
Do an teasing epilogue lol!
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