Reviews for Harry Potter's Discovery
knuckles 8 chapter 17 . 23h
I really liked to story
Iryelb chapter 17 . 3/28
I liked the story well enough but it just seemed kind of bare, like almost totally detail free.
Ash Lee Brodford chapter 17 . 3/22
this was so awesome!
Priya Ashok chapter 17 . 3/8
Thank you.
Rhino109 chapter 6 . 2/21
What happened to Quirrell then? I doubt he just disappeared from reality when Harry killed a troll. You're leaving quite a few plot holes in your wake.
Rhino109 chapter 4 . 2/20
This really needs to be beta read. You keep putting silly things like 'trough' instead of 'through' So it breaks down toHagrid led the group of new students over the lake and a pigs dinner plate the castle." Seems kinda silly XD
Rhino109 chapter 1 . 2/20
I see where you're going with it already and its kinda funny. Just thought I should point out the UK does not broadcast anime on air as we don't really broadcast any TV in different languages. Wish I could get SAO repeats on demand from my Virgin Media package XD
era-romance chapter 6 . 1/21
muton would have been a better choice for Neville
SSSra chapter 17 . 12/17/2016
another great story that was well written and well planned out.
Bronze chapter 5 . 10/27/2016
Gee, who would've guessed that Vernon could actually learn that it was extremely hazardous to his health to abuse Harry?!
Mumia0813 chapter 17 . 8/9/2016
Do an teasing epilogue lol!
Squarekiddo chapter 17 . 6/30/2016
Didnt like it much, Canon rehash, bad ending, worse epilogue, and it all was just a summary
Squarekiddo chapter 12 . 6/30/2016
I dont like your Canon fetish, alot of your things makes no sense with their new abilities.
Squarekiddo chapter 10 . 6/30/2016
RAther pathetic to have him knock himself out because he bumped his head. His a Shinobi, if you dont have him acting like it on key points of you story then whats the point
Squarekiddo chapter 1 . 6/30/2016
Abit odd he wouldnt try the Shadow clone first, he seems like smart kid though.
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