|Reviews for My Comforter|
| Fifille chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
Yup, I thought it was Jasper who slipped up! Right up until '...she felt his arms wrap around her...' or something.
ABSOLUTELY AMAZING FOR A FIRST FANFIC! ) No, scrap that...ABSOLUTELY AMAZING, REGARDLESS OF WHETHER IT'S A FIRST FANFIC OR NOT! ) ) 3
| TheRoadgoeseverOnAndOn chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
A great story. Very well written.
| Rocka.NGW chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
ohhh Amanda that was soo cute :)! I loved it, and I honestly did think it was Jasper at first. Sneaky of you. Stories like these make me adore Jasper and Alice, but you know my heart lies with Emmett and Rosalie!:D
| Lena xo chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
AHHHH yes you did have me thinking it was Jasper! Haha :)
| Ms.K216 chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
I really did think it was Jazz that slipped up! Did you do that on purpose? That was actually an amazing first fanfic. The best I've ever read!
| ThatOneQuirkyFangirl chapter 1 . 3/6/2010
At first I was saying "What?" then I read the author note and said, "OH." That was awesome!
| FrozenSoldier chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
Yes, you had me fooled!
Wow that was amazing! I loved how you started it off, epsecially how you made everything think it was Jasper who had slipped up. That was a nice twist on things. I don't think I've read a one shot where Alice had been the one to slip and Jasper was there to comfort her. It was very unique, well done :)
This bit was my favourite:
I couldn't even hear my name being called.
I prowled through the trees. Then I came to the source of the smell. It was a young couple. They were sitting on a bench...close...intimate. I couldn't differentiate from who the mouthwatering scent was coming from, but it didn't matter.
| Carrie chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
Ow wow I never review but this was seriously good. I really expected that it was Jasper! I feel awful now! I'm going to drag around for the rest of the because of my lack of trust for Jasper.
Really good! Please right more oneshots like this!
| mzboredasalways chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
you had me going i admit it.
| Pink Mouse Dudette chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
This is sweet _
| Zaidita chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
Thanks for telling me about this story :)
Ok so I TOTALLY thought it was Jasper who screwed up, but then I thought- no Alice would have seen that one coming- but then Jasper walked in so I didn't guess right in time haha lol.
I love the ending. I can't tell you how MUCH I LOVE THE ENDING. I just don't think I can say it enough. Alice and Jasper lying that way just watching each other all day. It's so romantic, oh I love it so much. LOVE IT.
Great one - shot.
| CharlieHyuga75 chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
i admit you had me fooled. i really thought it was jasper! until i got to the part about the "calmness washing over me" then i was like what? but it was great.
| Cecilia1204 chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
Good story! Yep, you had me fooled - I actually said aloud - "It's Alice!". Everyone looked at me funny :)
Wallabies v All Blacks next weekend! - Can't wait!
| ME LOVEY JAZZY chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
Uh, yep, I thought it was Jasper. Man...I feel bad now for having no faith in him... I'M SORRY! No, really, I love him to death, but it's usually him who slips up in the fanfiction... That was a good twist! Nice job!
| starkidpaige chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
ha ha! You had me fooled! That was very clever! Although I would reccomend clarifying whose point of view it is next time!
Welcome to fanfiction! LOL! I must say you are a great writer! I am funsizedevil (AKA Paige). I'm a beta reader, so you can come to me for help on your stories if you want! Although honestly, I don't think you'd need much help! This was great! I LOVE Alice and Jasper fluff! You should read mine if you have time!