Wow, this is very different and refreshing that Edward actually crosses Bella off his list. Thanks.

God damn, I shouldn't have read that author's note...even though that's NOT what happened, you now have me thinking. I feel like it was a terrible ending, when you actually ended it in a great spot! Lol. You, my friend/notreally/author-who-I-don't-know, have given me a complex. And, as much as I'd love to complain...I can't. Because a realistic story, and a realistic story that leaves a little thought is always a great thing. You did just that. Ding-ding-ding, three points to the author with the long user-name, even though I spent more time typing this than I would have typing your user-name. Anyway, I know it would have been a little more generous to review on each chapter, but I couldn't do it. I just wanted to see what would happen next. Two more points for you! This story was great! It's been so long since I've been able to find something that's kept me reading. Most stories, even this one, I'm like - ew, that's dumb, where's my bags? I'm leaving! But in this case, I was like, hey, I'm gonna' pull an Agent Edward and look again. It was worth it! Yes! Ten more points for you. Anyway, amazing story. You should definitely keep writing, because it seems as if it's a natural talent for you. I loved this, and I'll definitely check out your other work! Thanks for writing ;D

Peace out!

- Rose

I lol'd at the ending you wanted, and lol'd again when thinking about it.

Good story, a bit cheesy, and Edward was basically a retard before this chapter. Okay, more like idiot. Great job on writing this piece of story :)

lol I'm glad no one let you finish with : "I was about to kiss her again when I heard a loud bang, and her lifeless body slipped from my arms"

love it

It is like 4 at night..in the morning

i love the fact that you didn't unnecessarily stretch the fic... just perfect story...

Brillant! Love that Bella made him wait hehe

Wowwww very different fanfic I never read where Edward is a patient n Bella his nurse lol n den gosh da way u made edwella relationship I was kinda getting angry I mean y was Edward so slow to realize he love her n he always screwed things up gosh bt thnx god atlast dey got together I felt bad for Bella Edward was hurting her feelings a lotttt n den da epilogue I didn't get y Bella refused to marry Edward dat much thnx god atlast she said yes pheww bt overall nice story

Well dumb edward was refreshing, may be :P

What the heck! Cullen sounds like a 13y/o girl !funny though ;)

" I hate you, Edward, I hate you!" Whitlock's voice started to shake and tears threatened to spill out"

I seriously thought whitlock was jasper witlock n was wondering WTF was going on ! ROFL

I really like this! You did really well with spacing out the plot line, I'm glad it wasnt really drawn out. It wouldn't have been so good if it was. I loved Bella in this story! Edward was silly... Silly love sick FBI agent! Haha I actually finished this whole story in a day, thanksgiving at that! Let's just say we have too many engineers in my family, that like to talk about politics. Haha I did really like this though! Great job!

lmao my parents were in amway too. I think they still are actually, they just love having people around them without making effort-more than the vitamins

Great read! Thanks for sharing.

u r so freakin funny!

Thank you for the HEA! It's why I read fanfic.

Such a good ending! Very imaginative. : )