Excellent. I'm looking forward to reading more of this story. Great start.

Story is off to a good start.

i have to be honest i wasnt actually gonna read this now since its about 3:30 am..i just figured i'd put it on my alert thingy and read it later..but i just got hooked and read it all and now i need to know what happens ...so please update soon..great start loving valnerable edward so far :D

Definitely a good start! More please)

Very intriguing start to the story. You've set up all sorts of good stuff. Now I just want to know the back story of what happened.

Nice start. Edward as an agent is hot and I always find babbling Bella at treat to read. Can't wait to see where you take this.

Cash bribes work best, so pay up! Granny needs new clothes! LOL

Interesting story premise! I'm definitely looking forward to finding out more. I love Assassinward in any incarnation. What is it about deadly men that is just so darn attractive? ;)

Good stuff, jb.

I liked Bella's sweet little speech at the end, knowing Edward would forget about it after the morphine.

Newton sounds like a real charmer. I would hate to have him for my boss, or my doctor.

So, who shot Edward?

i like it cant wait for more

this sounds like it will be a great story and i can't wait for more.

I absolutely adore Bella's rambling in this part. She cracks me up. You crack me up. If I were a beta, I wouldn't review, but since I'm only a betaish person, I feel okay about it.

Oh goody. I will accept both begging and bribery.

Did I see an Agent Whitlock in there somewhere? Will he be around more? I hope he didn't get shot, too. He'd probably be stuck with some sort of short-haired pixed nurse. Hmph. That wouldn't do.

Great start :) Can't wait to see where it goes. And where it came from? Why's Edward Masen filled with bullet holes?

loved it!

Great new story. :] You've got a great start on it, so keep it up.

Update soon,

Kolored.

I actually read this fic over at Live Journal (I can't remember where I found the link) and really loved it! I love Edward the FBI agent. I won't spoil the rest, but it would be great if you could continue it past the initial chapters, this is great writing.