Intriguing start! Can’t wait to read more!

Good Lord
so cute!
AND IF YOU WOULD HAVE ENDED THIS PERFECT STORY WITH "I was about to kiss her again when I heard a loud bang,and her lifeless body slipped from my arms" , I WOULD HAVE MADE SURE THAT YOU WOULD BE THE ONE THERE INSTEAD OF HER. ;)
thank you for sharing the story , it was really nice.
Om~

As a Bulgarian woman I have to ask, where did you get your information for my country?
Yes, we are not a wealthy republic,but we aren't that poor either.

As a nurse, I can you, we see a lot of asses. After a while, it's like looking at a knee or elbow. At least in the clinical setting it's like that.

Love It!

loved it I laughed so hard thank you!

I stopped reading as soon as Bella started over sharing with Edward about her colleagues. I know nurses are known to gossip but not so much with the patients! Especially those that are trying to become a doctor!

So immature, this story.

Love that you gave them a happy ending, but like the ending no one would let you use, I thought she was going to get hit by a car crossing the street at the end and The End. I enjoyed how cute and naive Dumbward was.

loving this, very clever how you wrote Alice in as Whitlock.

Fantastic

The best thing about the story?
Even after Edward meeting Bella the writer didn't go lousy on Edward's character.
He thoughy he fell out of love with her only to eventually fall for her again.

So great

Great story. love your clueless Edward.

Thank you for your time and your story. I enjoyed reading it with a happy ending. Good job.

That was a good chapter. I started to cry when he was going to leave her until Alice came in with the good news. Good writing.