Reviews for One night
Madness is a State of Mind chapter 14 . 8/13
Reneesme is such a bitch and the good kind
Pens71 chapter 35 . 4/15
I really enjoyed the characterization of both the wolves (minus Jake) and Cullens' (minus Nessie).

However, in my opinion, Jacob was a very unlikeable person in this story. Normally I wouldn't agree with Edward, but I thought he was spot on about Jake's disrespect of Nessie. I found him to be quite manipulative and selfish in the beginning of their involvement.

Nessie appeared to be a bit pretentious. That whole "throw my 'famous' name around" mall incident plus the "trying to force vampire-wolf" friendship was disgusting.

Hopefully, this doesn't come off as rude. I'm merely stating how I viewed this particular work.
Guest chapter 35 . 11/26/2016
This is one of the best stories I have read so far is hard to find a good Jacob and renesmee story
PastOneonta chapter 35 . 11/4/2015
I enjoyed this, the humor that is so true and unexpected for Renesmee as a half vamp is really good. She is really funny with Jake. I read one of your other stories a while ago and just now had time to read something else you wrote. You wrote this a long time ago, it was probably one of the most original Jake and Nessie stories even then. Thanks for writing and leaving it posted.
Guest chapter 36 . 5/6/2015
loved it
Elizabeth T. Diaries chapter 14 . 8/14/2013
Loved the start but I don't think I like this Nessie. Sorry.
Elizabeth T. Diaries chapter 4 . 8/14/2013
He doesn't even know her name!
Elizabeth T. Diaries chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
Love it already
TrueRedDragonGodEmperor chapter 9 . 8/9/2013
Nessie is a bit irritating. I know she is suppose to come off kind of humorous but all I get is that she rude and annoying.
Guest chapter 26 . 7/29/2013
poor jake he's only a sexual toy...apparently it's all up to her family and especially her "daddy"; she doesn't have a say ("And I cant really desribe the bond I have with my dad, but its something that means the world to me." She looked straight into my eyes, "And I could never do something that he would hate me for.") where's her personality, does she have one? does she feel the slightest amount of love that jacob feels for her? she really is going to let him stand by himself against her family, isn't she? because the family and esp. daddy will be against. will she put the slightest effort to fight for them, or just whine in her dream for another good fuck with good old jakey? i bet on second
mina chapter 36 . 4/25/2013
good fic it was nice read!
friend0fhell chapter 35 . 11/24/2012
And once again brilliant writing...
Carlee Adison chapter 35 . 11/21/2012
"No! I spend all of my free-time banging your n-"

DEAD! That was a priceless line.

OMG, this story was seriously so charming. I love the ending, the middle, ALL OF IT. I hope someone finally told Jared he isn't crazy... Hahaha.

Seriously though, you're such a great writer, sorry for flooding you with 35 reviews in such a short time period! Or not sorry, if you like my review spam. LOL
Carlee Adison chapter 34 . 11/21/2012
What can I even say about this chapter? EMBRY MAKES MY LIFE!
I realized why I love Nessie so much. She's my fave spoiled adorable brat. I love the trust exercises, like, for real! OMG! This story is almost over :(
Carlee Adison chapter 33 . 11/20/2012
Many a squeals during this chapter. Especially when Charlie comes home! LOLOLOL! Have I ever mentioned how much I love Charlie? And Jakenesmee or however that would be spelled. :P
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