Reviews for One night
Guest chapter 36 . 5/6
loved it
Elizabeth Diaries chapter 14 . 8/14/2013
Loved the start but I don't think I like this Nessie. Sorry.
Elizabeth Diaries chapter 4 . 8/14/2013
He doesn't even know her name!
Elizabeth Diaries chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
Love it already
TrueRedDragonGodEmperor chapter 9 . 8/9/2013
Nessie is a bit irritating. I know she is suppose to come off kind of humorous but all I get is that she rude and annoying.
Guest chapter 26 . 7/29/2013
poor jake he's only a sexual toy...apparently it's all up to her family and especially her "daddy"; she doesn't have a say ("And I cant really desribe the bond I have with my dad, but its something that means the world to me." She looked straight into my eyes, "And I could never do something that he would hate me for.") where's her personality, does she have one? does she feel the slightest amount of love that jacob feels for her? she really is going to let him stand by himself against her family, isn't she? because the family and esp. daddy will be against. will she put the slightest effort to fight for them, or just whine in her dream for another good fuck with good old jakey? i bet on second
mina chapter 36 . 4/25/2013
good fic it was nice read!
friend0fhell chapter 35 . 11/24/2012
And once again brilliant writing...
Carlee Adison chapter 35 . 11/21/2012
"No! I spend all of my free-time banging your n-"

DEAD! That was a priceless line.

OMG, this story was seriously so charming. I love the ending, the middle, ALL OF IT. I hope someone finally told Jared he isn't crazy... Hahaha.

Seriously though, you're such a great writer, sorry for flooding you with 35 reviews in such a short time period! Or not sorry, if you like my review spam. LOL
Carlee Adison chapter 34 . 11/21/2012
What can I even say about this chapter? EMBRY MAKES MY LIFE!
I realized why I love Nessie so much. She's my fave spoiled adorable brat. I love the trust exercises, like, for real! OMG! This story is almost over :(
Carlee Adison chapter 33 . 11/20/2012
Many a squeals during this chapter. Especially when Charlie comes home! LOLOLOL! Have I ever mentioned how much I love Charlie? And Jakenesmee or however that would be spelled. :P
Carlee Adison chapter 32 . 11/20/2012
Ermagherd. Excitement.
Carlee Adison chapter 31 . 11/20/2012
Nonono, Jake no move to London, Nessie move to Forks.
I lose correct grammar when I gets upset.
Carlee Adison chapter 30 . 11/20/2012
DAMN IT! Felix is funny too but... NAHUEL!

Oh hey, would now be a good time to apologize for the explosion of reviews? I can't read a story and not review every chapter... ;)
Carlee Adison chapter 29 . 11/20/2012
Okay, Charlie is still pretty funny...

"Oh, are you a wizard?" he muttered.

I laughed, "Nope, werewolf."

Charlie sighed, "Of course you are."

Charlie constantly bringing up his hand down her pants. HAHAHAHA. This whole story just SOUNDS like something I would write.
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