|Reviews for Adsum|
| raksha chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
loved the trilogy. have just found your stories & love them. i don't need a reply. keep writing & ignore those who say otherwise.
| DustyTowers chapter 1 . 12/13/2009
Brilliant! The notes you gave at the end were really interesting! Thanks for a wonderful story.
| thisISme chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
Aw, ghosh ... that's been brilliant. Love it! I love how you included Cass in all this, and how Jack - unlike Pete - thought of her and of not simply deciding for Sam.
I so love Happy Ends! :D
Thank you for this read, pol! :)
| shadowsamurai83 chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
Sweet! Loved it, and the middle one shot as well. A nice happy ending for my favourite couple. Thanks!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
I really loved this. A perfect bookend to the other parts.
| drewandian chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
*sigh* you did it again! I can't get enough of your stories! and the details about Carmina Burana...SO very cool! :)
| Zoser chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
Lovely end to you trilogy.
| leiasky chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
Didn't I review this? I thought I reviewed this already! Well, I'll do it again! Stupid site probably lost my comments!
Anway, I just love the callback to Threads with the mention of the dog. I love that he found a house for her, and that he made a point of mentioning that he didn't BUY it and how he doesn't want to be like that OTHER guy and make big decisions without her.
You could SO make a series out of this - with the cuddling in the closet thing in every single one. . . LOL!
Wonderfully written, characterized and I'm looking forward to the next one!
| ScruffyLovin chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
Ooh, this is so full of AW and *SQUEE!* hehe. :D And the irony of the music just makes it even more awesome. :D
| Kathryn Shadow chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
Oo oo oo oo oo ooh. And all of those O's would be smushed together if would let me. -glares at it-
THIS IS SO PRETTY. -hugs entire triptych- SQUEE! Gah. Squee.
How's the wrist? :)
| hedwiggins chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
I really like this. I love that they took Cassie with them to the cabin. And I rather think that as you have it that she would have pleaded with Sam to not go through the gate again. I love that Jack wanted to have her live with them. And I love that you included his comment that Sam was hurting too. That isn't stated often enough in stories, and I really like that you've included it. Thanks. :)
| Holy Hannah chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
Nice trilogy. It always bothered me that so little was mentioned about Cassie dealing with Janet's death. You did a good job addressing that. Thank you.
| Tigerlily Brown chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
A great trio of stories! I love the idea of them laying on the closet floor. I don't know why, it's just such a simple place to make such a humongous promise. (I love all the research you put into this too. :-)
| Alys5 chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
Great story. I loved all three of them! Sam and Jack finally getting what both of them wanted.
| Majikthize chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
Ah, I am so glad you wrote this last part. I love it. I particularly love the symmetry with Sam/Pete in Threads - the same situation but completely the opposite - and the first part of this story.
I'm not sure if I believe she didn't jump him and ravish him in those couple of days up at the ccabin alone... very restrained of them methinks!
There's loads of stuff I loved about this; the opera, her finding him on his back and the sizzly moment, bookshelf (I have half those books you know), involving Cassie and her being part of them. My favourite bit was the very brief mention of him teaching her fishing; I had a "hips before hands" moment reading that, which is, for me, something I have always wanted to see for Jack and Sam. I'd like to see that fleshed out, er, so to speak.
Thank you, as always, for writing and for capping off a perfect weekend for me with a perfect story.