Reviews for Mine
kaciemk chapter 9 . 5/20/2011
I almost wish they would just change Bella so she could protect herself. As a newborn she would be at least equal in strength if not stronger than Aro I think. Also, something I keep forgetting to bring up: it seems like you've read the Sookie Stackhouse series. ] The name Godric, the vampire tears, and the fact that the vampires are centuries older than in Twilight. Love it! That is one of my favorite series ] I love Eric
kaciemk chapter 8 . 5/20/2011
poor emmett [
kaciemk chapter 7 . 5/20/2011
The entire chapter I was thinking 'if he's going to defy Aro, why doesn't he at least tell Bella's family she's alive?' - so glad you made it happen ]
kaciemk chapter 6 . 5/20/2011
Just have to review to tell you I'm so interested in this story!
kaciemk chapter 5 . 5/20/2011
I love puppies! ] although I'm sure he's not a puppy anymore. Loving this story! But I'm sad that when the Cullens finally find Bella or she returns to them Emmett will be heartbroken that Bella and Edward are together [ poor Em
kaciemk chapter 4 . 5/20/2011
Love that Edward and Alice are warming up to Bella ] although I'm almost a little sad that either Emmett is going to move on or Bella will. I feel like the other will have their heart broken. Also, I kind of hope Emmett and Rosalie never get together. Rosalie really makes me mad in this story!
kaciemk chapter 3 . 5/20/2011
I just want to review every chapter to tell you how much I'm enjoying this story
kaciemk chapter 2 . 5/20/2011
Loving this story!
kaciemk chapter 1 . 5/20/2011
Very interesting story - different than anything else I've seen. Love it!
bananahzz chapter 4 . 5/19/2011
I like that you made the newborn bonded to the maker.
Guest chapter 3 . 5/19/2011
I think after the first time I would have killed myself.
bananahzz chapter 2 . 5/19/2011
Okay I was a little disjointed btu the way the scenes were split. But I did like the drama this chapter brought.
bananahzz chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
How do you not have more reviews? This chapter was captivating!
scarvesandscars108 chapter 14 . 4/18/2011
This is great!
PhoenyxPhyre chapter 14 . 4/7/2011
Nice. The childhood movie scene is very endearing. Maybe because I grew up watching those as well? I rather enjoy the two stories of yours that I have read. Keep it up and I might just subscribe to the all- hailed author alert. Very emotionally complex and correct. I used to find the changes in perspectives occasionally confusing without any visual aid. (Asterisks, lines, some kind of indication that the view is different.) But now I find it mentally stimulating and charming. An individual authorial quirk, if you will.
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