Reviews for Up, Down and Around
Mary in the Stars chapter 1 . 3/20/2012
This is so sweet!

You really captured the spirit of these two characters. Marguerite was so girlish and sweet and Eddie is so, so in love with her. I like the descriptions of the bay window and Eddie combing his hair; you depicted the two teenagers' home lives very well.

You also have a beautiflu writing style. Some of you expressions were really striking: "glistening with unfallen tears;" "circle of flourescent brilliance;" "dressed with so much love;" and "he reflected her, like a mirror" were my favorites.

Wonderful story!
Eslisle Cullen chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
mitch Albom doesnt get enough credit does he? amazing book, amazing story. :D
evidently-emily chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
Gorgeous story. I love the complexity of the relationship between the Marguarite and Eddie. 3
done.with.marblesxx chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
Aww... that was an adorable story. I loved it. I've always wondered about Marguerite... I liked your language and the simple descriptions. Good story.
tambera chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
That was a good story. I realy liked how romatic Eddie was.
Respect the bubble chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
this is such an amazing story! Could you please do more like it? Eddie is so sweet!
The Void Kitsune chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
Aww, this was so sweet! Great job on the story!
Morning. xx chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
D'aww. How sweet ). I haven't read the book, but it's so adorable ).
waterjazz chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
Aw, I liked this a lot. Good story.