|Reviews for A Chance Encounter|
| jk chapter 23 . 6/27
well I didn't understand chappie 23 at all...what was that third person shit? I thought Edward was making out wit some human...that was just written fucking weird
| jk chapter 21 . 6/27
she asked him to stay? OH HELL NO
Edward needs to die
its obvious to me that this vik is actually better then you let on...that's clear by what he said to edwad in the alley...that bella should be respected...and he loves ...
bella should kill Edward...and be with vik for reals!
| jk chapter 19 . 6/27
he says she didn't come to him..why should she have assward? you said you didn't want her! why would she come to you?
he says his family is her family...why would she think that? the left her and didn't say anything...just ditched her
he says he would give her anything...I know something you cant give her Edward...cause Tanya has it!
and you never gave her anything before...so why now?
he lived his life for 40 something YEARS and never once checked up on her...nothing...and he thinks he has a fucking right to her? funny how shes his now...but wasn't "his" back then...he wasn't thinking of his mate...notreally...just himself
| jk chapter 18 . 6/27
bellas dead because awhile ago she had some human blood? god Edwards a insufferable ass...he didn't think that way of Demetri...or himself when he drank human blood...or anyone in his family when they fucked up...but when its bella...that's it ...its over...shes ...gone...why does assward always come to he wrong conclusion?
I hate him in this story...truely
| jk chapter 17 . 6/27
soooo edwad gets to fck bella over again and again and again and this is what you give bella? no she doesn't get hot sex she gets to be comatosed and molested? does she have sex with vik? she didn't say...just that he did whatever..thats not very clear writer...honestly ihope Edward doesn't get her virginity...he doesn't deserve it...but bella deserves better then what you've given her...which is
| jk chapter 16 . 6/27
I don't give one fuck how lonely Edward was (it was his doing) how guilty he felt(his doing) how much he wanted to forget (he wouldn't have to if he hadn't betrayed his mate)
I don't care why he gave Tanya his virginity...I don't care if he was hallucinating and thought it was bella...I thought mates meant something...I thought it meant you and only you ...ever
Edward should kill himself and bella should move on...done
| jk chapter 15 . 6/27
I thought bella let it all go...all of Edward when she was at that river afew chappies ago...but now shes looking like shit and not feeding? ya really sounds like she let it go...can we believe anything you write? I don't think we can...unless you fix this! in the next chapter bella better be better then ever...in bed with 2 hot male vamps!
| jk chapter 13 . 6/27
hopefully bellas getting laid...I don't care if Edward only had one night with that slut...he knew his mate was out there and he fucking cheated on her...mates are forever...he cheated...and it was his virginity...that just makes it soooo much worse..
and the way he noticed every little thing about the weirdo in the jungle...shit I was thinking he wanted her too
| jk chapter 11 . 6/27
how is bella going off of a misunderstanding? she ran cause he was at least at a point screwing Tanya right? or was it because she thinks their together now? I think just the once is enough...tanyas 100 years old ...a succubus...can you imagine how many dudes have been inside her? and Edward went there..he can never get is dick clean enough...for real
and what happened to his morals...I thought he was waiting for love and marriage! he waited like 100 years met his mate...ditched her only to give his "innocence" to a whore?
yaaa wheres Chelsea? maybe she can un mate them and give bella someone wrthy!
| jk chapter 10 . 6/27
I cant get over the fact that he wouldn't mate with his mate...ya know but he would give his virginity to a vamp that has seen more action then then the energizer bunny. I really don't think he should be forgiven...if this used up pos is her real mate...someone fucked up and needs to give her a new one pronto
| jk chapter 7 . 6/27
im with bella on this even though you'll make her a weak ass bitch and forgive him...but from the sounds of it Edwards been fucking Tanya for years...I don't care if he never loved her...bellas his MATE and he wouldn't have sex with her...he left her and gave his virginity to a 1000 year old slut...
theres no forgiveness for him...hes used goods and bella can do better!
| jk chapter 6 . 6/27
Edwards with someone? hes not a virgin? then I want nothing to fucking do with him! he left bella he shouldn't get a companion...screw that
| jk chapter 5 . 6/27
ohhhh now he wants her? um...hmmm...how about no you stupid arrogant fuck. you wouldn't commit 44 years ago so go fuck yourself.
reading bellas pathetic weak pov was hard...it was hard to read...shes just so fucking pathetic
| jk chapter 4 . 6/27
bella just lets that prick fucking man handle her? talking all that shit and she doesn't do shit...oh she slapped him but then went right back to her chair to what? explain herself? I would have fucking left...just like that she doesn't need to say shit to his stupid ass...touch me I ffucking dare you
| jk chapter 3 . 6/26
why have a alice pov? no one gives a fuck about her meddling ass...all that des is give away the damn story...its like a damn preview...I hate it