Reviews for A Chance Encounter
angie671 chapter 24 . 3/18
I'm still here and hoping you will finish your story, pretty please with a cherry on top. :)
mannco chapter 24 . 2/13
Hello?... I hope this review finds you quickly so that I may express my whole heartedness of wishing/hoping that even though it has been over 3 yrs that you will keep your promise of not abandoning this story. Plz, I beg you, finish this story. We finally get to the point to where they are talking things out and there is no more chapters past 24. Plz finish this story.
TrillionSchiffer chapter 23 . 1/8
Progress indeed. And superbly realistic. After everthing they went through, trust me no one is expecting an overnight deal.

Excellent writing.


Please we need more.
TrillionSchiffer chapter 17 . 1/7
WOOOO this chapter... Crushes it with angst. The levels here are crazy high.

Man, I wish you were still writing. I would love to know how this ends.
jk chapter 21 . 12/2/2015
Edward said" ive never wanted anyone but you ever" Really? I wonder how he can say seems that he was hard for Tanya! so he must have wanted her!

Edwards a lying sack of shit
jk chapter 18 . 12/2/2015
funny how bella is "dead" says assward cause her eyes are red...LOL didn't he used to feed off humans...what a fucking hypocrite! How can bella still want and pine for that nasty used up piece of ass? Edward fucked Tanya! a 1000 year old succubus! mr morals refused to give himself to his MATE but then fucked a nasty whore?

hell I say bella and viktor for this fic! Edward can go fuck himself hes too gross now
jk chapter 10 . 12/2/2015
this is still BULLSHIT...he fucked that nasty sperm dumpster! How can bella be with I'm now? ERR ITS SOOOOO GROSS...hes all nasty and used now...NO THANKS
jk chapter 7 . 12/2/2015
So hes going to find bella and explain that him and Tanya aren't together that while he wanted to wait for marriage and wouldn't give bella his virginity that he gave his virginity to a 1000 year old whore and has been her fuck buddy ever since? ohhh that makes it so much better.
I'll tell you right now, if bella gives Edward her virginity I'm going to be fucking pissed! if Edwards been fucking Tanya then bella should have her own "friend" if she cant have Edwards virginity then he sure as hell shouldn't get hers!
he was the one that left her! and he gets her back in better condidtion but she gets a used up skank? that's not fucking fair! ANd yes if hes been fucking Tanya then hes a skank
Lvstwilghttoo chapter 24 . 9/7/2015
Wow! Could do nothing but read your fabulous story when I came upon it. You have such a way of bringing emotions into words so beautifully. I know from reading your authors notes that there is a HEA for them. It's been awhile since you have updated. Would dearly love to read how they work this out. I'll keep watching.
Nicoconsd chapter 24 . 8/7/2015
So id been saving this chapter hoping that I could save a few and finish in one swoop... I guess that was just not meant to be. I've loved this story from the beginning and will read every update u do in the future which I hope will be soon but until then I hope life is going well and it's nice to know from this chapter that Bella at some point will forgive and be with Edward :)
jk chapter 23 . 6/27/2015
well I didn't understand chappie 23 at all...what was that third person shit? I thought Edward was making out wit some human...that was just written fucking weird
jk chapter 21 . 6/27/2015
she asked him to stay? OH HELL NO
Edward needs to die
its obvious to me that this vik is actually better then you let on...that's clear by what he said to edwad in the alley...that bella should be respected...and he loves ...
bella should kill Edward...and be with vik for reals!
jk chapter 19 . 6/27/2015
he says she didn't come to him..why should she have assward? you said you didn't want her! why would she come to you?
he says his family is her family...why would she think that? the left her and didn't say anything...just ditched her
he says he would give her anything...I know something you cant give her Edward...cause Tanya has it!
and you never gave her anything why now?
he lived his life for 40 something YEARS and never once checked up on her...nothing...and he thinks he has a fucking right to her? funny how shes his now...but wasn't "his" back then...he wasn't thinking of his mate...notreally...just himself
jk chapter 18 . 6/27/2015
bellas dead because awhile ago she had some human blood? god Edwards a insufferable ass...he didn't think that way of Demetri...or himself when he drank human blood...or anyone in his family when they fucked up...but when its bella...that's it ...its over...shes ...gone...why does assward always come to he wrong conclusion?
I hate him in this story...truely
jk chapter 17 . 6/27/2015
soooo edwad gets to fck bella over again and again and again and this is what you give bella? no she doesn't get hot sex she gets to be comatosed and molested? does she have sex with vik? she didn't say...just that he did whatever..thats not very clear writer...honestly ihope Edward doesn't get her virginity...he doesn't deserve it...but bella deserves better then what you've given her...which is
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