|Reviews for A Chance Encounter|
| Nicoconsd chapter 23 . 8/3/2011
Yay a new chapter and a step in the right direction for these kids! I was a little confused when she was thinking back and then keeping that straight with present but man once she made her decision and she was going to go with Edward I was all thinking "really it's gonna happen!" I'm so giddy to see what happens and I know it will be slow progress for these two but man I just want them to hug so bad! hehe I can't wait to watch them on their road to recovery :)))
| My Friend Alice chapter 23 . 8/3/2011
It was great seeing the update. You really have a wonderful story that needs to progress. I look forward to more of your lovely words.
| imwithemmett chapter 23 . 8/3/2011
I know it had to happen but poor Viktor. I am actually crying real tears here for him.
| Snuffy10 chapter 23 . 8/3/2011
OMG Erin I have missed you and this story so very much! I could not wait to read it...I was so excited to get the alert I had to read it twice to make sure I read it right. Welcome back to ACE and take all the time you need. We never left and will be with you until the end! Thanks so much for the long awaited chapter...holding my breath for the next step...Edward better tread lightly and truly appreciate Bella this time...maybe we can get some citrus in the upcoming chapter? Cuz when they do it will be emotional and hawtttttttt.
| LAL69 chapter 23 . 8/3/2011
I think Edward should bring her back to the medow and just love her. Just hug it out!
| Annazonie chapter 23 . 8/3/2011
Yay! So glad to see your update on this one! I understand completely... and will not let this story go. It's just too good! I'm glad she left with Edward... It's still going to be a process... Bella is really damaged.. Edward has his work cut out for him.. I just Hope Bella will give him the oppertunity and not rip him to shreds, lol! Looking forward to the next update...
Curious if Bella and Edward will be on thier own for awhile to sort through things, or if Edward was planning on going back to the Cullens with her?
| shadowbride chapter 23 . 8/3/2011
YOU still have readers. You still have readers.
It feels like forever since you updated, but I know from my work sometimes you have to have a break or writing/creating become all consuming and nothing feels right.
This was a great chapter. Loved seeing Bella slowly making her decision. It didnt take long to become fully engrossed in the story again.
Looking forward to further updates and the rest of the B/E story.
P.S. Who was the little lady with Emmett (previos chapters)?
| longtobeme chapter 23 . 8/3/2011
Thanks for the update. It's finally happening! Bella is leaving Victor's cesspool and trying to reclaim her happiness with Edward. I hope that Edward can help Bella to heal from this nightmare.
| MK543 chapter 23 . 8/3/2011
You write so well and so slow but I waited; good things come to those who wait. Sometimes Bella's thoughts are excruciating in their detail; she is very languid. Let's get'er done, girlie! I'm missing me some macho man...uh, Edward. :)
| TessLouise chapter 23 . 8/3/2011
| icrodriguez chapter 23 . 8/3/2011
Bella’s memory of their first time at the meadow was both beautiful and heart breaking. I found it especially touching in how she basically mourned the death of her innocence, then soldiered her determination to find it once again.
I have a feeling that the next chapter will begin the unveiling of Edward’s true reasons for all that IS Tanya. I, for one, am desperate to hear that story.
| Lik It Like This chapter 23 . 8/3/2011
I hope you are really starting the next chapter already *squeals delightfully** :) Thanks so much for the new chapter and I look forward to following these two to a HEA (there is one right?)
| kinsano chapter 23 . 8/3/2011
Glad you're back! I loved the meadow revisit! It was a refreshingly new perspective on a canon scene.
| cheatbuster chapter 23 . 8/3/2011
In chapter 16 he said he will tell Bella about Tanya even if she didn't want to hear it, but he has talked about the sun and the moon and everything in between instead of telling her the truth. What was he waiting for? To make sure she is no longer with Viktor so she won't have any other choice than him? I hate how manipulative Edward is. Bella was better off with Vik.
| sherylb chapter 23 . 8/3/2011
Thanks for the update! It makes sense that she has needed time to digest everything.
"It would be the first of many cleansing steps.
The next was going to have to be his."...I guess we all know what that means-he is going to have to tell her the whole truth-about Tanya and everything else...that is going to be tough, even though I have a very good idea of what he will say...