|Reviews for A Chance Encounter|
| jk chapter 16 . 6/27/2015
I don't give one fuck how lonely Edward was (it was his doing) how guilty he felt(his doing) how much he wanted to forget (he wouldn't have to if he hadn't betrayed his mate)
I don't care why he gave Tanya his virginity...I don't care if he was hallucinating and thought it was bella...I thought mates meant something...I thought it meant you and only you ...ever
Edward should kill himself and bella should move on...done
| jk chapter 15 . 6/27/2015
I thought bella let it all go...all of Edward when she was at that river afew chappies ago...but now shes looking like shit and not feeding? ya really sounds like she let it go...can we believe anything you write? I don't think we can...unless you fix this! in the next chapter bella better be better then ever...in bed with 2 hot male vamps!
| jk chapter 13 . 6/27/2015
hopefully bellas getting laid...I don't care if Edward only had one night with that slut...he knew his mate was out there and he fucking cheated on her...mates are forever...he cheated...and it was his virginity...that just makes it soooo much worse..
and the way he noticed every little thing about the weirdo in the jungle...shit I was thinking he wanted her too
| jk chapter 11 . 6/27/2015
how is bella going off of a misunderstanding? she ran cause he was at least at a point screwing Tanya right? or was it because she thinks their together now? I think just the once is enough...tanyas 100 years old ...a succubus...can you imagine how many dudes have been inside her? and Edward went there..he can never get is dick clean enough...for real
and what happened to his morals...I thought he was waiting for love and marriage! he waited like 100 years met his mate...ditched her only to give his "innocence" to a whore?
yaaa wheres Chelsea? maybe she can un mate them and give bella someone wrthy!
| jk chapter 10 . 6/27/2015
I cant get over the fact that he wouldn't mate with his mate...ya know but he would give his virginity to a vamp that has seen more action then then the energizer bunny. I really don't think he should be forgiven...if this used up pos is her real mate...someone fucked up and needs to give her a new one pronto
| jk chapter 7 . 6/27/2015
im with bella on this even though you'll make her a weak ass bitch and forgive him...but from the sounds of it Edwards been fucking Tanya for years...I don't care if he never loved her...bellas his MATE and he wouldn't have sex with her...he left her and gave his virginity to a 1000 year old slut...
theres no forgiveness for him...hes used goods and bella can do better!
| jk chapter 6 . 6/27/2015
Edwards with someone? hes not a virgin? then I want nothing to fucking do with him! he left bella he shouldn't get a companion...screw that
| jk chapter 5 . 6/27/2015
ohhhh now he wants her? um...hmmm...how about no you stupid arrogant fuck. you wouldn't commit 44 years ago so go fuck yourself.
reading bellas pathetic weak pov was hard...it was hard to read...shes just so fucking pathetic
| jk chapter 4 . 6/27/2015
bella just lets that prick fucking man handle her? talking all that shit and she doesn't do shit...oh she slapped him but then went right back to her chair to what? explain herself? I would have fucking left...just like that she doesn't need to say shit to his stupid ass...touch me I ffucking dare you
| jk chapter 3 . 6/26/2015
why have a alice pov? no one gives a fuck about her meddling ass...all that des is give away the damn story...its like a damn preview...I hate it
| jk chapter 2 . 6/26/2015
this would be great if bella actually got over assward...fuck him he ditched her...to her knowledge doesn't want her,,,so why doesn't she just forget about his skiny ass and find some hot vamp meat...is she just gonna whine and btch through out the whole story? I hate that
| kikirev chapter 23 . 3/7/2015
I still wonder about this stunning story sometimes and so wish I could read the rest of your vision for it.
I hope you are well and that you may be inspired to finish this. Thanks!
| S1203 chapter 24 . 12/25/2014
Hello, I am only stop by to wish you Marry Christmas and wish you all the best in 2015! You and this wonderful story are not forgotten...
| vegevamp65 chapter 24 . 10/11/2014
Love this story! Can you please continue it?
| Robfan4ever chapter 24 . 8/25/2014
I have loved reading this story and an desperate to know what happened after chapter24 ! Where is the rest of the story?