Reviews for What's in a Name |
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![]() ![]() ![]() omggggggggggg I hate shenny so much, it feels like incest. Their relationship is so so maternal |
![]() ![]() ![]() You did an amazing job on this and it would definitely be in the top 10 or maybe even 3 |
![]() ![]() I read this story several years ago and decided to go back and read some of the ones I remember liking. This one was one of them and while I still enjoyed the story, it needs some help. Their, they're, there. Then and than. And other basic grammar and spelling rules. At times I found it very hard to keep going because of the mistakes. If it was just one or two misses I wouldn't say anything, we all make mistakes, but if I played a drinking game with the errors I would have a BAC of at least four times the legal limit. I know this story was written a while ago but I hope that you've found yourself a good beta. If not you really should. Fixing the errors in your writing would make your stories, which are already good, wonderful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What an excellent, REAL story. Not idealized or even completely OOC. Very well done indeed. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow...what an amazing story. Thanks so much |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful beginning cannot wait to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story, I just wanted to tell you that you use the wrong forms of several words throughout. I mention it only because I would want it mentioned to me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was such a great story! I love that you gave Penny PPD. Not in a mean way. It's just there are so many stories were Penny and Sheldon have a baby and everything is just so lovely. I also really liked that you had Penny's family in it. So many people only focus on Sheldon's family and it's really dissapointing. |
![]() ![]() awww love this fic |
![]() ![]() Loved it awesome story |
![]() ![]() ![]() What's marcus' problem against tv and movies, when penny brought it up he practially dismissed it like he's too good for it or something |
![]() ![]() ![]() What the heck is wrong with Penny's sister Ruby making out with Howard, is she desperate? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't see Leonard and penny kissing one last time especially sitting out in the hall like that when anyone could've seen them. I know Sheldon said Penny could name their son but I'm still a little surprised maybe he didn't talk her out of naming her after his imaginary drug illuded cousin. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sheldon isn't being self centered Leonard he's not good at reading people or reconizing Penny is upset without voicing it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just wanted you to know that story is one of my all time favorites, I don't if you'll get this review or not but this is such a great piece of writing. It's sweet and tells a story of a makeshift family with all the characters you've put in here. The way you write Penny and how she is the center of all this is magnificent and I want to thank you for making this because it's one of the stories that's inspired me to write and I adore this story and read it over again from time to time. thank you again for making this, it's wonderful ~ Matt |