Thank you for sharing your time and talent. It was very well-written.

This culture is so different from mine. Where I live, it's not normal for daughters to wait on their fathers as if they were their maids. I was a bit shocked when their nightly routine was described as Bella cooking, and Charlie walking away from the table to watch TV while she was left with the dishes. And now, he's welcoming her back to the kitchen. I have a daughter and a son. I don't raise them like this, and their father would die of shame if he had to live with himself as a burden to me. We're both adults, we both work (Bella has work, too, she goes to school), and we both pull our weight. I just don't get it. This is not an ideological feminist rant, I'm just relating my own personal experiences in relation to the normalcy described in the story.

Aaaaaaah! This was so good! You are an amazing writer and really got Edward's perspective perfectly! I know this was written before Midnight Sun, but it was just like how he talks in it! Thank you for sharing this amazing version of Eclipse with us!

Side note- This might be my computers fault but chapter 12 goes completely blank whenever I click on it.

Thank you again! I absolutely adored this and am now going to go read the seven chapters you wrote of Breaking Dawn!

Not even gonna lie. The last two sentences made me sob

I loved this! Absolutely impeccable writing, felt like a continuation from Stephanie myer herself!

I've always had a lot of sympathy for Jasper, I have a lot more in common with him than I often realize, probably because we're both physically scarred individuals - his moment in this chapter where he asks Bella whether or not she realizes how the emotions in a room affect him, I realized he was begging her to have empathy for him after all the times he's had empathy for her and been there for her, and this sums it up. I liked having Edward's insight into it; you captured Jasper's thoughts perfect, him silently wishing that he'd been a normal human and not a gifted human, then maybe he wouldn't have suffered as much as he had . . . poor guy can't catch a break needing to feel what everyone feels physically.

You did great work with this series, though it's a shame you haven't updated Breaking Dawn.

i wish to read a fanfic where Edward really takes a stand for himself ...like Bella is totally disregarding his feelings he is uncomfortable and doesn't like it that she is so he'll bound to meet Jacob and favour him ...i wish that someo write a story where he just calls out on her shit

I always hated that part of the book. I wanted to kick Bella's ass for being a cheating immature bitch. Jacob is definitely immature and not to mention disgusting for using suicide like that.

Will you please write Edward's POV. in new moon?

I hate the way every writer make Charlie out to be stupid including Stephanie Myers. How did Charlie become a cop if he soooon unobservant as you all write him to be. I live in a small town and we have crime I bet Forks does To. I guess that should be were criminals live because Charlie is a stupid cop that has a shitty daughter

Isn't this VERY similar to the work done by BlondieAkaRobin ? I'm talking the exact sentences. I remember because I listened to the audiobook

I know there’s probably no way you still check these reviews but oh my gosh. I love this so much. Eclipse is easily my favorite out of the series and this was SPOT ON. It made me mourn how much better the movie could’ve been even more. Great job!

This was so wonderful, thank you so much for writing this! Everything was just so fitting and perfect, and really dated my needs after reading Midnight Sun

Interesting take on Renee! Now that 15 years later we FINALLY have the completed midnight sun, it's always interesting to see how close or how differently people interpret things from EPOV. All in all not a bad rendition, thanks for sharing!

Oh, I also wanted to say that of the SEVERAL EPOV fics I've looked into, yours is by far the closest to how Edward talks and sees things in Midnight Sun. Of course, everyone has their own opinions and sometimes I have my own, differing ideas on occasion of how things go or how he would see things, but I freely admit that currently I'm not nearly motivated enough to write something as long as this and have little right to extensively constructively critique.

thanks again for sharing! (although it's been 10 years since this was posted, so who knows if you'll ever read this)

which chapter does jacob kiss bella? i want that in edwards pov :) btw love it!