Very good writing. I'm glad that you decided to write the entire version of Edward's perspective of Eclipse. I think you may have been the only one. I've seen several other attempts to write Eclipse from Edward's perspective...however they ALL gave up for various reasons. Many because they said not enough people were reading. Which is sad...they should write because they want to...and that should be enough. Another writer did an outstanding job...but quit because she got a book published...and decided not to finish. I'm glad that you decided to finish the entire story. I greatly enjoyed reading it. :)

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You are very talented! I can't wait to read Breaking Dawn! Thank you thank you thank you!

I just finished reading Eclipse Edward's POV. I wanted to leave this review to say firstly WOW! You did an amazingly brilliant job of bringing Stephenie Meyer's books to life again through Edward's eyes. I am a huge Twilight fan and you have given a truly wonderful gift with your hard work and dedication in writing these accounts. You have captured the essence of Edward's character brilliantly. I agree with those that encourage you with your own novel - you have great writing style and should pursue your dream. Thank you for all of your effort. I LOVED IT! Now I will begin your Breaking Dawn account... I send you masses of applause and encouragement to continue with your Twilight journey from Edward's POV - it's brilliant as are you! Thank you so very much. Best wishes to you and your family :)

I don't mean to be offensive, but you're very derogatory toward the wolves aren't you? Even Carlisle and Esme see them as irksome. Still, this is a very interesting story.

Enjoyed reading you version.

Ahh, you have no idea how thrilled I was to see you had done Eclipse as well from his POV.I think you did it so well. My eyes are aching from reading on my phone though lol, trust me its well worth it. It was an excellent read, and I'm telling all my friends about it to get them hooked as well :3

amazing chapter...soooooooooo romantic :-)

Another great chapter. The last part was hard for me to read since you wrote Edward's fear of losing Bella so realistically that I really felt it, too.

Great. Jacob's so evil and smug but insecure and sad at the same time. I think you got it just right.

i loved the whole thing. please continue and write breaking dawn as well. THANK YOU

Good chapter. I always like when Edward admits to himself that he wants something for himself not for Bella. Like the wedding, he would do it her way to make her happy, but he very rarely admits that he would want things differently. I like that.

I love this chapter. Loved it in Eclipse and love it here as well. I always have to read it a second time before I can go on to the next chapter.
The way Edward figures out what Bella wants it hilarious.
I already hated the way Bella kind of ruins the proposal for Edward by her opposition to marriage in Eclipse. It's even worse seeing the whole scene through his eyes. So you wrote it very well.

Awesome! Love the way Edward calls Bella his wife. It always seems ridiculous when the word boyfriend comes up. But you use it in just the right way.
I'm too curious whether really everyone besides Edward already knows about Bella's demand in the upcoming compromise when she doesn't seem to know about it herself just now. But somehow I can't imagine Alice to be that indiscreet about something so private.