|Reviews for Storm|
| BelieberNation chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
great start for a story i luvvvv musa and riven together loll
| ForestGuardian311 chapter 10 . 7/19/2011
I never thought I'd feel sorry for one of the Trix, but I think in this chapter, you certainly had readers feeling sorry for Stormy. ( (Do you happen to know which episode Bishop is in? I'd like to see what he looks like...)
Oh, so that's why Darcy screamed...
And this storm...Freaky, but interesting, I must admit. I really never thought of Musa as an empath. (Then again, I didn't actually start watching 'til maybe when 4Kids was airing the 3rd season.)
A very chilling and suspenseful story...Can't wait to read more!
| ForestGuardian311 chapter 3 . 7/19/2011
Hmm, very interesting.
I must say, the twist with Helia and Musa being cousins is very nice... And for future reference, Helia is Saladin's nephew. )
Very good so far!
| xxxMusarockz chapter 4 . 8/25/2010
i dont think u hv 2 lonely review! its more like 105! XD yes it was confusing at the end, about the whole icy thingie, but its good! I so wanna read more! Darcy's getting jelous ooohh! hehe
| xxxMusarockz chapter 3 . 8/24/2010
Curiousity is building up...slowly
Tbh its boring me, too much detail! I hav low attention span...it takes me yrs to read it and its moving slowly...
I do still wanna keep reading so dont hate me xD
| xxxMusarockz chapter 2 . 8/24/2010
this is sooo detailed! that it's taking me a decade to read each chapter! You're a fab author! I really love your story! And im liking the thing going on between Musa and Riven! Its so exciting! xxx
| Dalia Inscription chapter 17 . 8/9/2010
aaahh what you wrote was soo good! please write the sequel im going to look for it. thanks for writing this.
| xxxMusarockz chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
this is looking fab!
| Lonewolf8792 chapter 2 . 5/26/2010
great story keep up the good work
| Chaotic Umbreon chapter 17 . 3/22/2010
Randomly had an urge for Musa and Riven fanfictions. Looked. Saw this. It blew my mind. Epic awesomeness and excellent writing! Absolutely adored it! Nice job!
| babyvfan chapter 1 . 3/20/2010
Nice, I like it.
| Karon19 chapter 9 . 2/24/2010
Seems inhumane to keep Musa locked in their room for that period of time. Even getting weekly exercise wouldn't be enough to justify her being there. Anyone would go out into a storm after that.
And wow, those first two paragraphs! Maybe it was a glitch when you downloaded the file but please break them up! They're cluttered.
Wait to see what happens next.
| linny-marie chapter 17 . 2/20/2010
Oh. my. gosh, wow, goodness! I love this story! It is nearly 4 and I have to wake up in 3 and a half hours, but I just HAD to read the end of this. And I am so so so sosososos glad/happy I did. The fact that you have me stumbling over words, repeating words, and not being able to make up my mind which one is best says wonders about this story and your intelligence to come up with it! Thank you so much for such a great story!
I just about cried with the fight scene, (don't ask, I've become an emotional wreck lately) when Helia punched the wall and nearly killed Riven, and just about died laughing at all you Author's Notes.
And I love how you made Stella her best friend. Stella has always been my favorite, with Musa coming in at a close 2nd. But lately with having watched part of season 4, courtesy of BanjoGate on , I really needed a Riven Musa story. And I am so internally grateful that the day I needed it was the day I found this GREATNESS!
So, if you haven't been able to tell by this ridiculously long ass review, I loved this story, and I can't wait for the next story and anything else coming my way fRom you! Thank you so so SO much!
| YourLaughMakesMeLaugh chapter 17 . 2/10/2010
I Love the story! write a sequel please?
| theShipperOfManyShips chapter 17 . 2/10/2010
wow this story was genious! i loved it altho my only quelm being what you did with bloom and especially layla who acted like a bitch most of the story. I love what u did with the witches especially stormy, although i feel so bad for her :'( and i am going to favorite this story just for the ending with Musa being pregnant! i'm anxiously awaiting the sequel!