Reviews for Random JasperEdward oneshots
the-lion2 chapter 3 . 10/3/2009
Very nice. In a way romantic!
Pinky Stardust chapter 3 . 10/3/2009
That was awesome. Happy Birthday AG!
deenerneener chapter 3 . 10/3/2009
Another excellent effort! I loved the added voyeuristic element. (I kept thinking the story was doubly voyeuristic, and that confused me until I finally realized that all reading is, essentially, voyeuristic. I'd never thought of it that way before.)

I continue to be surprised at how much I enjoy the slashfic. I suppose it's because I agree with both of them (manparts rule; so say my girlparts).

Thank you for sharing angstgoddess's birthday gift with us! Looking forward to the next of these random one-shots.
MySlashyFriend chapter 3 . 10/3/2009
Fantastic! And third person limited, from a third person. Noice.

You already know i think your writing is wonderful. And Anna's. Collab is... yep, that did it.

I'm sure I enjoyed it as much as she did.

Thanks for posting!

Frenchie :)
TabithaAbraham chapter 3 . 10/3/2009
Great story present for AG. Thanks for sharing it with the rest of us. Whew, time for a cold shower. :D
totally manic chapter 3 . 10/3/2009
i love this! just awesome, all of them, but i have to say no. 3 is my absolute favourite! ingenious, well done! ;)
patch138 chapter 3 . 10/3/2009
oh hot damn...what a video that would be!

prospectcat chapter 3 . 10/3/2009
Nice. :)
TheRugbymom chapter 3 . 10/3/2009
very unique! nicely done!
cabr chapter 3 . 10/3/2009
Loved it! What a clever clever girl! Will we be able to read about what she saw in those videos? I hope so...
mycrookedsmile chapter 3 . 10/3/2009
smart, smart library girl. yum.

Happy Birthday AG!
cabr chapter 2 . 10/3/2009
I don't know when you posted this, I hadn't seen it. But it was really hot! I loved that Jasper was so aware of Edward and of protecting him-in a way...He really wanted him all to himself and he got him! :)
ElleCC chapter 3 . 10/3/2009
Ah, that was fantastic ) Fun and cute and sexy. Lucky us, benefiting from Sam's bday!
mozzer0906 chapter 3 . 10/3/2009
library boy porn for the win!

I loved how you had all of this from a woman's perspective, watching everything unfold. It was a very unique take on narration and it worked well for this.

I had to laugh because near the end I had a feeling I knew who the voyeur was.

Great job.
Lawn Girl chapter 3 . 10/3/2009
wow. what a birthday gift. AngstGoddess is a lucky gal indeed. That was one saucy library encounter. Thanks for sharing!
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