|Reviews for In A Life|
| LC chapter 30 . 11/26/2016
Can I... Can I just pretend all this happened instead of canon?
| Alibi Nonsense chapter 7 . 4/23/2016
That end bit of introspection hits so hard.
| Alibi Nonsense chapter 6 . 4/23/2016
I love the 'got lost on the way to the map store' one. XD That was awesome. This whole story is awesome, actually. The chapter where he's being rude to the Uchiha elders is kind of nerve-wracking, until he explains about how they can't touch him (I like that bit; how like the Uchiha), and the kunai chapter, where you don't actually say what kunai it is until the end is really cool, because you're wondering what's so interesting about a kunai, and then it dawns on you.
| Elise chapter 30 . 4/22/2014
Brilliant story. :)
| Sefi Ne chapter 30 . 10/10/2013
What a fantastic story! I truly enjoyed Kakashi's point of view through all of the moments in his life. (Forgive me for not reviewing every chapter; I was busy going to the next to find out more of the story) There was the one chapter about how Kakashi had failed at all the things that mattered and it struck my heart.
Wonderfully done! :]
| Tiny Cherie chapter 18 . 7/3/2013
I have to say...this is one of my favorite chapters :D
| twilightromance4ever chapter 30 . 6/23/2013
I LOVED! this story! It was amazing! I loved it! You should do an epilogue of him actually dying and seeing his team again. that would be wicked cool :D just a thought!
| wolfeclipse25 chapter 29 . 7/29/2012
So my review for chapter 30 got cut off so gere it is. I'm sad I'm done reading this but it was a great story! I think the final touch of Sasuke as a ghost was nice.
| wolfeclipse25 chapter 30 . 7/29/2012
I'm sad I'm done reading this but the Sasuke-gh
| wolfeclipse25 chapter 24 . 7/29/2012
That's a nice explanation on how Kakashi got the Magekyo Sharingan! Obito didn't want to do it but he had to...
| wolfeclipse25 chapter 18 . 7/29/2012
Hahaha! Creepy scarecrows and sausages! I love Pakkun and everyone!
| wolfeclipse25 chapter 13 . 7/29/2012
Ya-hoo! Pakkun and co. make an appearance!
| I ran out of good pennames chapter 24 . 6/10/2012
I just wrote a review for chapter 30 and I forgot something (seems impossible when you look at the size of that review xD)!
But it was Something Important - something that happened in this chapter - something I think you really hit the nail on the head with: The fact that the only person Kakashi ever really will have trouble forgiving, is himself. This chapter made me cry... I mean I caught on pretty quickly on why Obito would be such a meanie, but Kakashi totally fell for it and for a second he was just a lost little boy, broken by hardships and being pushed too hard, too soon. *sniffles* It was a good chapter! And I just have to point it out again: You are very good with characterisations. :)
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| I ran out of good pennames chapter 30 . 6/10/2012
Alright, instead of 30 small and orderly reviews, you get one long messy one. Alright here goes:
I have avoided this fic for quite a while... Because it looked overwhelmingly sad. And yes there was chapters where I teared up a little, but by the last chapter I actually found my spirits being lifted and I finished it with a bittersweet, but slightly cheerful, smile. Maybe it's because despite it all and especially despite the fact that Kakashi have had quite the awful life (I mean really. Awful. As you said - Poor guy).
Nontheless you (well, I) get the feeling that Obito (and that btw is a very comforting idea - that the dead can come back and help you through life) helped Kakashi get through the rough patches of his life in one piece and even though he wasn't the best teacher, he and his students still became friends and comrades. The ending with it's 'we really are going to be alright, aren't we?' I feel like yes - they are, even if Sasuke couldn't be safed and they lost something precious, they are going to be alright because life moves on and bad things happening doesn't mean that good wont.
I really think you got around most aspects of Kakashis life (from what we know of it and made up realistic and interesting stories about the parts we don't), and I think you have made me love him a little more, because you didn't make him completely unable to move on, like many an author of fanfiction have - made him a suicidal mess and that just does not agree with me. So I'm glad you didn't. Also I found the part where he is introduced to Gai very funny xD the 'for some reason Kakshi felt like crying' (or something like that) especially. xD Haha, I've often wondered if that isn't how a lot of people feel around Gai most of the time. Also the part with the girl and the bleach, that was pure gold! xD OH, OH, and the chapter where Kakashi is introduced to Icha icha paradise - Very funny! I have always wondered how a person so intensively private and, well, stuck up? or perhaps him just so out of touch with his agegroup - and everything normal for it-, that him being introduced to porn is rather strange and I've always wondered who and what gave him that habit. I like your idea. '
Alright I'm afraid that this review has moved on from long to hideously so. So I'm gonna stop my ramblings here and just THANK you for posting this wonderful fic! :D I hope you will write something more Kakashi-centered in the future, 'cause aside from Itachi and Shikamaru - Oh god, there's so many awesome characters in this universe - then Kakashi is on my top-five over all-time awesome Naruto-characters and there aren't enough fics out there who does him justice. B-)
I think that was about all I could think of writing (and then some xD).
/I ran out of good pennames. :D
| readerFAN chapter 30 . 4/19/2012
very good story :-)