|Reviews for Masters and Servant|
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/27/2014
I was wondering when Jack would finally join. That was so amazing I loved every bit.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/4/2014
I thought is was only oz and gilbert but...o_o um...yeah
| twoheartsx chapter 4 . 3/27/2013
I love it! You did a great job.
| MadPineapple chapter 1 . 12/7/2011
Lovely story. Jack and Oz seem to get along so good when Gilbert is involved -
It's really good and IC and it really works. A really good job.
| Nessie-san chapter 4 . 8/27/2011
Very well done. That one mistake in chapter one was the only mistake in the whole thing! Oh, but a bit of advice...I find that in reading smut, having the whole thing in one "chapter" (no matter how long it is) is generally easier to read than having it in several parts - Other than that, I have no advice for you on this XD Though you said you'd never written threesome before, it was very well done, and if you hadn't said anything, I wouldn't have been able to tell. It was also very interesting to have Jack (who is Oz from another time period) and Gil to be fucking at the same time that Oz and Gil were fucking. It was quite an interesting paradox, and I have to wonder whether Oz and Jack were enjoying the sensations that Gil was giving to them both, instead of just having the pleasure that Gil was giving them as individual people. It'd be interesting to explore that XD
| Nessie-san chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
I'll give a real review at the end, but for each chapter, I'm gonna give grammatical/spelling reviews.
"...all fores" should be "all fours"
| Countdown Till Mayhem chapter 4 . 9/12/2010
Best. Threesome. EVER. :D
| Free of Mundane Thoughts chapter 4 . 7/24/2010
This made me love you unconditionally. Twin power and sadism will take over the world! :D And I love all three of them to death. There should be more of this threesome. It works well. :DDDDD
| yaoiEnthusiast chapter 4 . 7/15/2010
wait... is it sex if jack does it with oz? thats a very complicated questin. is it like twins and an incest senerio, or is it masterbation because oz is the reincarnated form of jack? hmmm... one of lifes great misterys
| I chapter 4 . 6/22/2010
| I chapter 3 . 6/22/2010
| I chapter 2 . 6/22/2010
Why it didn't surpriced me Vincent was the one to deflor Gilbert? Now am having *Nosebleeds.
| I chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
My! asdfghjk, that was hawwwt. I melted.
| x-X'Amethystte'X-x chapter 4 . 4/30/2010
Ah perfect, just what I needed! Giant four chapter lemon featuring some of the sexiest couples I can think of right now! :D If I didn't find a fanfic like this tonight, I'd be in tears, literally. Thank you so much for writing this! YOu made me so happy! :'D
And not to change my shirt bcause the one I'm currently wearing is covered in blood from the massive nosebleed this gave me...
You my dear, are amazing. -
| Prussian Blue Tears chapter 4 . 3/17/2010
[whimper] It's over... T.T