|Reviews for Emmett's Little Sister!|
| TwinTigerLover chapter 2 . 5/24
i understand that you have tried to edit the beginning but i still find it a little 'slap dash?'. the foundation of explanation is there but you have limited yourself in writing technique, have you considered expanded the description side of the intro, giving a better detail of emmett and 'the woman' or a better interval between the two men inspecting them and going to bed. it might improve it because at the moment the first two chapter are almost a skeleton structure, awaiting expansion. however i shall continue to see if the detail improves with the plot. x
| TReneeM chapter 32 . 10/12/2015
aww that was cute. now please update. I wanna see what's in store for the happy hybrid family
| TReneeM chapter 23 . 10/12/2015
| DreamUnicorn247 chapter 32 . 10/9/2015
Update soon! :)))
| Lady Atarah chapter 32 . 10/8/2015
For Ashleigh to protect her thoughts from Aro, can't she just manipulate Bella Cullen's shielding gift?
| Lady Atarah chapter 31 . 9/20/2015
Hey I really like your story and I wish that I had read it earlier. I know it's been over two years, but please do try and date soon. Keep up the great work!
| Katy chapter 4 . 8/19/2014
This is awesome!
| FizzWizz2011 chapter 31 . 8/12/2014
Loving the story so far update ASAP
| Lauren chapter 30 . 12/2/2013
Please continue. I really like it and hope you continue soon.. Ive been waiting a really long time..
| Guest chapter 31 . 7/21/2013
I love this story until the ending came and she met Demetri baby she shouldn't have been that excepting she should have been heartbroken sad angry betrayed and most of cheated
| the-compulsive-tea-drinker chapter 31 . 7/16/2013
This is soooooo good! I really really like this story. Please please please update soon.
| Stinker126 D chapter 31 . 5/23/2013
OH MY GOSH! I couldn't stop smiling at chapter 31! :D :D it was so cute at first I didn't really like the idea of Demetri liking the baby or them even having a baby at all but I was sadly mistaken because I loved the adorable moment with Demetri, Ash and Little Leo! Hope you update soon.
| Nina chapter 31 . 5/3/2013
Please continue.. I've been following this story for so long, and you haven't updated in a while... Please continue this story cause I really like it..
| Little Pine chapter 31 . 4/4/2013
That was such a beautiful chapter! I love the relastionship between Ashleigh and Nessie.
Also, so, so, so, SO excited to read more about Leo - aww, how cute! My heart just melted out of my chest. Eeeehh!
...this had better mean your son's name will be Leonardo. I want my daughter to marry someone fabulous.
| killingmyselfnow chapter 28 . 4/4/2013
Oh my gosh, so good that she's mind reading! I cracked up when she first took Edward's power from him.
And can I please have a car ride with Emmett?
Laura...ahahahaha. It made me really sad that she was stuck in a room with Demetri and knew her life was over. Poor LAURA! SHE CAN'T SWIM!
also, think i have depression.