Reviews for The Master Piece
Xenodriven chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
This Story Is Good Misheru-san _

This Is Tomoya Desu...

This Story Makes Me Remember Of Some Animes

That I Have Watched Already...

One Of The Good Factor Of This Story Is How You Finish

The First Chapter... It Is Really A Good Way Of Finishing

The Chapter _


But I Just Think That The Story Is Progressing Fast _


But Aside From That...

It Really Is A Good Story! _

I'll Be Waiting For The Next Chapter _

So... Later Then Misheru-san!
minahoru chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
Okay, I got it. It's nice and cool. But remember the ratings? your should have put it as Rated T if you're going to put harsh words such as "sex" absolutely.

The grammar is good for a first timer to write here in ff.n. But Mich, try to improve your descriptions~ There are some grammatical errors that I found but I'm lazy to copy-paste it here. Haha.

Try to find it out for yourself since I know that you're good in English grammar, right?

Oh yeah, it is my first time reading a fiction from an anime, Wish. Actually, I don't know this Anime...

Great story! Update soon and please read my stories too if you have time.

Good luck for tomorrow's Periodical Test :D
Jess Kuchiki chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
The grammar is already good.. :D

but don't use BOLD font to all words.. .

"Somebody is having sex"?

I think this fiction is n0t K rate but T..

There's no 'sex' word in da K rate..

that's, update and keep writing.. XD
anonymous chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
what a very nice story ...

I am rally absorbed to the story
cornydust chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
love the story but this story and it is better if you publish this in your blog misheru-san,i am glad to see you here on fanfiction and on friendster.i am amazed on how you create such a good power on you
fatiakirei chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
heeyy... the story is cool..

romantic story..

i have advice.. hmm... adding any funny acident...:)

good luck, girl
karine chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
ilike the story coz it is good and i will look forward to the next up the good work !