|Reviews for The Master Piece|
| Xenodriven chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
This Story Is Good Misheru-san _
This Is Tomoya Desu...
This Story Makes Me Remember Of Some Animes
That I Have Watched Already...
One Of The Good Factor Of This Story Is How You Finish
The First Chapter... It Is Really A Good Way Of Finishing
The Chapter _
But I Just Think That The Story Is Progressing Fast _
But Aside From That...
It Really Is A Good Story! _
I'll Be Waiting For The Next Chapter _
So... Later Then Misheru-san!
| minahoru chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
Okay, I got it. It's nice and cool. But remember the ratings? your should have put it as Rated T if you're going to put harsh words such as "sex" absolutely.
The grammar is good for a first timer to write here in ff.n. But Mich, try to improve your descriptions~ There are some grammatical errors that I found but I'm lazy to copy-paste it here. Haha.
Try to find it out for yourself since I know that you're good in English grammar, right?
Oh yeah, it is my first time reading a fiction from an anime, Wish. Actually, I don't know this Anime...
Great story! Update soon and please read my stories too if you have time.
Good luck for tomorrow's Periodical Test :D
| Jess Kuchiki chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
The grammar is already good.. :D
but don't use BOLD font to all words.. .
"Somebody is having sex"?
I think this fiction is n0t K rate but T..
There's no 'sex' word in da K rate..
that's, update and keep writing.. XD
| anonymous chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
what a very nice story ...
I am rally absorbed to the story
| cornydust chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
love the story but this story and it is better if you publish this in your blog misheru-san,i am glad to see you here on fanfiction and on friendster.i am amazed on how you create such a good power on you
| fatiakirei chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
heeyy... the story is cool..
i have advice.. hmm... adding any funny acident...:)
good luck, girl
| karine chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
ilike the story coz it is good and i will look forward to the next up the good work !