Reviews for I'm Happy
Flaming Butts chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
the poem was great, i could picture Daisy saying it in her mind
and i really appreciate the message you're trying to get across from writing it
keep doing what you do! :)
HalliwellMB chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
Deep.
xCharlie-Groupiex chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
Well done on this. It gave me chills. And you're so right ( I can see this being Daisy's insight. Unfortunate, but real, sigh. Great job! You captured her really well.

A very good way to get the message across, honestly. You should send this to become one of those government infomercials.

Once again, congrats on this.

xox Sacha
fivealive123 chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
That was great. Really powerful! And you are so right. It happens, every single day, and it goes unnoticed, unacknowledged, unchanged. A voice needs to be given for those who don't feel powerful enough to speak for themselves.
xXdaphneXx chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
This is such a wonderful poem. Great job.
Ria0013 chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
This was so good. There needs to be more GI fanfics out there:(
HensonsAnimal chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
omg i love this so much

kudos !

this is brilliant
notexactlytheepitomeofmaturity chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
Your poem was very simple, yet so meaningful. There are too many people like Daisy, it's terribly sad. I really want to do something about it.
Perilous Velocity chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
Such a good poem and so little reviews... I had to fix that.

Your poem is really touching. It showed the tragedy of Daisy very well. I loved the 'I'm happy' idea. Great job!

Magdalena.
Ohtar Vicky chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
Very good! The repetition of the line 'I'm happy' really adds so much effect. Like she's trying to convince herself. :D I loved Girl, Interrupted and i think this is the perfect way to describe Daisy. :D V*