|Reviews for Was Every|
| elizabeth bennette chapter 21 . 10/15/2013
Really enjoy the story. make me cry. :)
| kfoll chapter 12 . 9/23/2013
Oh for goodness sakes!
You are really relying on some pretty ridiculous plot bunnies here. Sudden paper rustlings and door slammings to stop anyone hearing the important parts of overheard conversations. Misunderstandings and coincidences aplenty. Muscle bound men opening other peoples doors without shirts. Blatantly obvious reactions that even the village idiot would be able to decipher.
Is Tanya going to have to resort to getting a buzz cut and wearing dungarees before he can see she is a raging dyke?
These two don't have a functioning IQ between them and they irritate me to the point of wanting to smash their heads together.
Good job it's well written, and finished!
| kfoll chapter 11 . 9/23/2013
I take it back, Bella is even thicker than Edward!
These two act like 15 year olds.
| kfoll chapter 10 . 9/23/2013
Good Grief, could this guy be any more stupid?
Oh and he sounds incredibly gay when he talks!
| pauleen chapter 3 . 4/24/2013
How sad that they can't communicate Their loved.
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 21 . 1/13/2013
Oh that was a wonderful way to present the epilogue.
Well done overall for this story!
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 20 . 1/13/2013
Oh finally! The misunderstandings have ceased...everything is out in the open! I love it!
Bella's explanation to Esme on the love she witnessed with Jake and his true love was fantastic. Very well put.
Awe for Bella/Edward acting like shy kids when trying to say the right thing to one another.
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 19 . 1/12/2013
Whoa what? He's not hallucinating in the end?
I wonder what the picture really was about.
I'm glad that Bella did some exciting things in Italy (then again, I'm making an assumption due to the email descriptions).
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 18 . 1/12/2013
I think I'm evil to wanting Edward to miss stopping Bella. If he truly wants to be with her, I expect Edward to travel to Italy himself and convince Bella to take him back. After all the pain his facade has done to Bella, he truly needs to work a lot harder to get her back.
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 17 . 1/12/2013
Oh the moments Bella had with Emmett and Charlie were really touching. Tears were threatening to fall for me...that's for sure.
Bella needs to get on the plane! She's suffered enough!
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 16 . 1/12/2013
I was not expecting the Tanya/Irina bombshell. Cool twist!
For some reason I do want Edward to be late in catching Bella before her flight. It should be his punishment for placing the engagement facade on Bella in the first place. His lies have consequences.
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 15 . 1/12/2013
Oh I hope Bella goes with Jake on his trip! School would be out by then for her right?
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 13 . 1/12/2013
Poor Bella; it seems like Tanya is taking everything from her. :(
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 12 . 1/11/2013
Oh dear...he finally gets a clue and wants to make a move and yet he comes across that. Why must misunderstandings stand in their way?
| Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 11 . 1/11/2013
Once again poor Bella. She's so excited after her talk with Emmett and yet everything goes crashing down for her when Edward/Tanya pick her up. I did love that Bella immediately called Jake when she needed someone to lean on.