|Reviews for Free from Desire Summer of Smut One shot contest|
| Do'B chapter 1 . 12/6/2012
wow, that was one hot story, James is an ass, so is Jacob and Leah well she's just a skank...James being the worse to betray Bella this way and how many other times has James been with others that Bella is not aware of? James is a real ass-literally...
the flashbacks were great as these gave great insight into the story, i definitely need one of these vacations!
| Nannyjojo chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
I would have loved a vacation like that too.
Oh my, that was so yummy.
| Fliberty chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
I liked this but found the end a bit odd. She'd just kicked him out and treated him like crap, so his reaction didn't make sense to me.
I liked the way you structured this to tell parts of the story in flashbacks.
| blb1000 chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
A little confusing with all the flasbacks, but in the end, I enjoyed reading it.
| Sunsetwing chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
So glad that she wasn't too late. James is such an ass, no pun intended. Wasn't ready for it to end.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
| mommymac0508 chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
Oh my if my husbun dose me wrong I want to go there
Yummy hotness I loved it
| Elara420 chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
Um, WoW! I really liked the way in which you wrote this! Thank You for your story. 3
| DaniBanani78 chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
This was hot! Love it!
| hln3twimom chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
That was some serious summer hotness...sign me up!
| QuantumFizzx chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
This was so intense! I loved the interweaving of recent past and more distanct past with the current action - made it so clear that Bella had a lot weighing on her mind. The revelation that she has (about Edward's character)at the end was nice. It was nice to see an Edward that seemed to be letting himself do the same thing as her (letting go of inhibitions) instead of the ever-popular horny bastard that is screwing everyone but decides to settle down with Bella. This was nice. And hot. whoo ;)
| celesticbliss chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
I think this might be the best bit of smut I have EVER read. Not even kidding a little bit!
"That depends," he finally spoke.
"On how good you taste.
Seriously? You rock my world.
Kyndall from FFA
| lionslamb86 chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
That one leaves you wanting more!
you know i really gotta stop reading these things when hubbys not home, leaves me frustrated lol
I love your writing style, while its not obvious in your stories- they are all very different- it's still there.
Looking forward to reading more of your work :)
| readingmama chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
That was a lot of sex in under 10,0 words. Good job. I can't help not blaming Bella for thinking she was a notch on his bedpost, he basically told her he wanted to fuck her not date her.
I would like to know what happened to these two next!
| TeamBedward chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
Makes a girl contemplate taking scuba lessons in the summer...