|Reviews for The Master of Discipline|
| tH1s chapter 25 . 4/24
I like the story. Want I do not like is how he become a "benevolent" dictator. Power corrupts and absolute power corrupts absolutely.
What I hate the most is the fact he refuse to share knowledge to cure cancer and other diseases. Refuses to release information about anti matter based power. He say that people of earth are not ready but when will they be ready? Technology, for all its potential to do evil, the good it can do makes up for it.
By withholding the technology in the ship, he is preventing the rise of a utopia. Anti matter as an energy source, is a game changer it is one of the most efficient ways to get energy except maybe from using blackholes. Plus with the medical knowledge they have, they could probabbly cure aging They could extend life indefinately. They could have killed death.
| Zarroc789 chapter 25 . 2/16
I absolutely love the story no matter how depressing it is but Musubi dying like that is just so sad and I really hate Seo I wish you would have had him die
| Yankee718 chapter 17 . 10/22/2017
OMG that omake was hilarious!
| Mandalore Requiem chapter 25 . 8/8/2017
And humble…. lol.
| Lordsunshine64 chapter 25 . 7/22/2017
a sad but we'll done story. thank you
| Blake2020 chapter 5 . 7/20/2017
| Blake2020 chapter 4 . 7/20/2017
Thrilling so minato got those three as sekirei and i wonder who the four and fifth one will be?
| Blake2020 chapter 3 . 7/20/2017
maybe he wing karasuba and benitsubasa as well
| Blake2020 chapter 2 . 7/20/2017
| Blake2020 chapter 1 . 7/20/2017
| Exige8002 chapter 25 . 5/18/2017
I love your story especially the plot. Your story was like a refresher giving the reader something new to experiance. I love characterization, Minato interaction with his sekirei and how they bonded to him. Not just simply, lashing to him like he somekind of meat. There a reason behing, yeah it's cool.
Nice grammar and storyline. The dialongue feel natural. Thanks for the wonderful story
| R.Draco chapter 25 . 4/18/2017
Wow!... Just WOW!
Never see that coming. Your story is awesome.
Minato, ruler of the world. Again.. WOW!
Thanks for the story.
| soggy noodle chapter 25 . 4/15/2017
This is what I have come to expect out of you.
An excellent story worthy of rereading.
21 out of 30
A breakdown of the 'out of 30' rating system:
* 1 - 10 denotes bad stories; basically, people who can amuse themselves staring at walls or enjoy the finer points of watching paint dry will be enthralled by these pieces and will spam "UPDAYTE PLZZ" in reviews
*11 - 20 denotes stories that are in the below to above average range with 15 being (obviously) being the absolute middle of the road - not bad and perhaps worth reading on but other better stories would take priority; people who aren't looking for the next Hemmingway or Stephen King but rather something not terrible but somewhat interesting fics to read casually and leisurely would be the prominent readers of those fics with this rating range
*21 - 30 denotes stories that are above average to fucking masterpieces of fanfiction (should be noted, a perfect 30 is basically impossible as it would lack any imperfections grammar wise, spelling wise, and plot wise - basically, a woman with a universally perfect body with a universally perfect personality - in essence, I reiterate, it's practically non-existent; an ideal of perfection and thus not something that could be made by our meager mortal minds); people who are looking for stories so engaging, they will make you call in sick to work in order to binge read; the 25s and up are the rare gems here on Fanfiction that have their readers clamoring for more content from their authors in a zealous fury so much so that offering of donations to Patreon accounts are made in private messages (damn the law)
| Guest chapter 18 . 4/15/2017
I shed no tears for you, Tsukiumi. You are the token tsundere and even though you had a rough break in this fic, I can abide no tsunderes. Good riddance.
| Guest chapter 9 . 4/15/2017
I know this is a tragedy and she will probably die down the road, but... YAY! Akitsu!