|Reviews for The Master of Discipline|
| lmc9389 chapter 25 . 6h ago
Great story but why no more Karasuba :(
| lmc9389 chapter 20 . 7h ago
| vienx.001 chapter 25 . 3/7
woww absolutely amazing !
one of the best with happy ending
although not perfect,,
so karasuba was released once again ?
i like the way u describe when minato have his entrance to earth
with cigarette in his mouth
and u even thought the chinese's minister's name..
really splendid story,,
i like the way minato become cold n hard hearted but still love all his sekirei,,
in this fic minato even cant have one meeting with miya or uzume
really thanks the story
one of best sekirei FF writer
| vienx.001 chapter 20 . 3/7
| SgtKang chapter 25 . 1/21
That was Epic. Thank you very much!
| moneygreen932 chapter 25 . 1/13
this story was good not great but good... i enjoy the sekirei stories and really enjoy the crack pairings (though Minato and Karasuba weren't really a pair they just had a few run ins and some time together) and this somewhat A/U... the only thing i didn't care for is it felt like the story moved really really fast... like all these things happen adn we're given a short summary about it instead of seeing it develop... it was clever and sensible in some sense but we didn't get to see Ku grow and develop.. we didn't get to see how Minato bonded with his sekirei after he had to attack places like china or after he took his father out... and of course we didn't get to read about Karasuba's death it was implied mostly and we knew she was gone but it was real fast.. and kind of a quick ending for her i mean she's an all powerful sekirei prob tied for the most strongest and yet she gets taken out by a drug in a quick fashion... and she may like hell she may even love Minato but i don't think she's the type to let her guard slip so easily... but anyway other than things feeling rushed at times this was a good story... now time to read about my girl Kazehana
| moneygreen932 chapter 20 . 1/12
i know this was written a long time ago and i could be wrong... But i believe i seen from multiple places and even seen it myself on her info page that Miya was never winged... Takehito was not an ashikabi therefore he couldn't wing Miya which is why some people want to see if she'll end up being Minato's eventually or in a dire situation... also i don't believe unwinged sekirei's have the crest yet because the only way Musubi was able to tell that Karasuba was winged was when she saw her crest after she changed clothes and also Hikari and Hibiki also can tell unwinged sekirei due to their lack of a crest so just helping you out a little even though you might have found this out by now and also i could be wrong though i dont think i am
| moneygreen932 chapter 15 . 1/12
awwww poor Musubi i'm sad about that... good thing in canon she met Minato because if she was forced to wing she really would have nothing to live for i can't imagine Musubi not being all chipper and excited all the time (except when she's fighting and mad) this made me appreciate her a bit more
| Guest chapter 25 . 12/12/2013
i enjoyed this fan fiction pretty much, i liked its plot and characters,but my only criticism is that haihane and akitsu don't get into the story much after awhile, if you could have gone more into their point of the story,my only complaint,thank you for writing this,oh and musubi kinda got mentally destroyed rapidly,but who cares! i liked it alot
| Guest chapter 25 . 12/6/2013
...what a ride.
Incredible writing with a gripping plot. That's all I have to say.
| aznxa21 chapter 25 . 10/20/2013
Wow... What a great story, ending was sad though. Keep up the good work on your other stories.
| Guest chapter 25 . 9/16/2013
| Pool-Guy chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
Wow. That intro is just...wow.
This has got to be the best line ever.
Laughing at his confusion she spoke. "Let's watch the world burn together, now and forever."
Absolutely amazing line. Incredible. I can't wait to read more.
| Toaneo07 Ver2.0 chapter 25 . 9/12/2013
wow,its a cool fic but what happened abotu with musubi
| Ashen Author chapter 24 . 9/8/2013
Moving, horrifying, logical, and unbelievably realistic. You kept everyone in character while beautifully deconstructing Sekirei. This is the first story of this series I'm favoriting.