Reviews for Double Arts Revived
Adnarim Neko chapter 5 . 10/26/2012
This ends really abruptly. I think that it would flow better if there was another chapter or two. It just seems like you got bored with it.
Fasak chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
Good story :D
nottrustworthy chapter 5 . 7/6/2012
dont stop writing!
RuinedPaper chapter 4 . 8/4/2011
This left me wanting more to! I would've been able see these situations happen in Double Arts weren't for the fact that it ended.
racooncity chapter 3 . 2/26/2010
Oh 8D you've caught me with this story! Please continue~! XD I would like to request moar KirixElraine scenes though, haha. Good job :)
Leanah Song chapter 3 . 12/13/2009
this is a good idea but the writing is awful. you're really choppy and you have multiple thoughts that you start and then jump to another. DETAIL! i have the same problem, i have too many ideas that come to fast and i try to put down so much so fast that details get left out. That's why i need to edit a lot. XD sorry for the slight flames but i am trying to give constructive criticism.