|Reviews for Baby's First Kill|
| callalili chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
Oh wow. She's coldhearted and ruthless but somehow still a sweet little girl, and I don't know how she manages it but the juxtaposition is very well done. You know, this really explains a lot about why earthborn gets you renegade points?
| impsy chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
Really enjoyed this, it was short and sweet. Interesting look on younger Shepard. And I love that line at the end, "but it wasn't hard." Perfect. Thanks for sharing.
| Cate Lynn chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
This is a really good little story. Really SAD, yes, but really good - effective. I think you used just the right amount of description as well... really made me feel like I was there, watching. And wishing I could scoop her up and run the other way. :(
| Padbie chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
Nice. Very descriptive. Short and to the point. Well written.